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Andres16

July 18, 2025

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English class.

Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people. The problem here is that in the activities we did I had a lot of mistakes. On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.

My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.

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Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.

My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.

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Andres16

July 19, 2025

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English class.


English cClass. English Class.

this is capitalized with title case usually the period would be omitted, but I thought it might be there for a stylistic reason

Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people.


Today I went to thean extra class of English class, with the more "advanced" people. Today I went to an extra English class, with the more "advanced" people.

Today I went to thean extra class of English class, with the more "advanced" people students. Today I went to an extra English class, with more advanced students.

Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people. Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people.

no issues technically, but more normal would be ...the extra English class with the more "advanced"...

The problem here is that in the activities we did I had a lot of mistakes.


The problem here is that in the activities we did I hmade a lot of mistakes. The problem here is that in the activities we did I made a lot of mistakes.

The problem here is that inwith the activities we did, I had a lot of mistakes. The problem here is that with the activities we did, I had a lot of mistakes.

The problem here is that in the activities we did, I had a lot of mistakes. The problem here is that in the activities we did, I had a lot of mistakes.

more natural would be "I made" a lot of mistakes

On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy.


On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, andeven though the activity was kind of easy. On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, even though the activity was kind of easy.

OnFor the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. For the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy.

On the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. On the first activity, I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy.

it would likely be more common to say "...and it was kind of easy" to avoid repeating "activity" unnecessarily

Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder.


Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder.

Also, in the second one, I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Also, in the second one, I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder.

the comma after "also" shows a natural pause after the introductory adverb the comma after "in the second one" might be technically optional, but it is common to put commas after introductory prepositional phrases

Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.


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Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English. Anyways, now I need to keep studying and try to reach my goals related to English.

My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.


My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I docan't find the correct word or I docan't write (spell?) it well, so if you could let me knowgive me any advice, I will be very grateful. My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I can't find the correct word or I can't write (spell?) it well, so if you could give me any advice, I will be very grateful.

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My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don'can’t find the correct words or I don't write it well, so if you could let me knowhave any advice, I will be very grateful. My biggest problem is vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I can’t find the correct words or I don't write well, so if you have any advice, I will be very grateful.

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