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My sister

I have a great sister, she has 26 years old. Now we are very close because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it's like my second mom. When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous. For example when we had gift in general we were jealous about the present of the other. But she always was nice with me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends.
Growing up we share a lot of thing and we laugh a lot together, we have also a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!
I think now it's my favorite person in the earth and I could do anything for her

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When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous.

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For example when we had gift in general we were jealous about the present of the other.


For example when we had gift in generalever we received a gift, we were jealous about the present of the otherother's present. For example whenever we received a gift, we were jealous about the other's present.

Use "whenever" to show the statement is in general.

But she always was nice with me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends.


But she always was nice withto me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends. But she always was nice to me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and her friends.

Growing up we share a lot of thing and we laugh a lot together, we have also a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!


Growing up we shared a lot of things and we laughed a lot together, we have also had a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny! Growing up we shared a lot of things and we laughed a lot together, we also had a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!

You might want to review how to speak about the past

I think now it's my favorite person in the earth and I could do anything for her


I think now itshe's my favorite person ion the earth and I could do anything for her I think now she's my favorite person on the earth and I could do anything for her

I have a great sister, she has 26 years old.


I have a greatn older sister, she hais 26 years old. I have an older sister, she is 26 years old.

I think you mean your sister is older than you. You say someone is an age, not that they have so many years.

My sister


Now we are very close because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it's like my second mom.


Now wWe are very close now because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it'she is like my second mom. We are very close now because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, she is like my second mom.

When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous.


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