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First, I like pepsi. Because I like taste.
This is moderate sweetness and fresh!!
But I like not only pepsi also coca cola!
coca cola is very delicious when I was tired.
This make me happy!
Which do you like pepsi or coca cola?
Which do you like pPepsi or cCoca c-Cola?
Which do you like Pepsi or Coca-Cola?
Most English speakers would probably also understand if your were to ask "Pepsi or Coke" for their beverage preferences.
First of all, I like pPepsi.
First of all, I like Pepsi
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because I like taste.
This can naturally follow your previous though and be one complete sentence.
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It has a moderate sweetness and tastes refreshing!
"This is a moderate sweetness" doesn't quite work. Here I changed it to "it has" to more accurately reflect that you are referring to the taste of Pepsi.
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But I don't only like Pepsi, I also like Coca-Cola!
cCoca c-Cola is very delicious when I was'm tired.
Coca-Cola is very delicious when I'm tired.
"When I was tired" sounds like you have only ever had one Coca-Cola and that you drank it while you were tired. Changed it to "when I'm tired".
This make me happy!
Which do you like pPepsi or cCoca c-Cola?
Which do you like Pepsi or Coca-Cola?
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よくやりました! Good job!
Some corrections to word ordering, make sure to remember to capitalized proper nouns, but over all your thoughts were conveyed well.
Which do you like p, Pepsi or cCoca cCola?
Which do you like, Pepsi or Coca Cola?
Capital letters for proper nouns.
First, I like pPepsi.
First, I like Pepsi.
Because I like the taste. Because I like the taste.
TWhisch is moderately sweetness and fresh!!
Which is moderately sweet and fresh!!
But I like not only pPepsi, but also cCoca cCola!
I like not only Pepsi, but also Coca Cola!
cCoca cCola is very delicious when I wasam tired.
Coca Cola is very delicious when I am tired.
This makes me happy! This makes me happy!
Which do you like pPepsi or cCoca cCola?
Which do you like Pepsi or Coca Cola?
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Which do you like pepsi or coca cola?
Which do you like Most English speakers would probably also understand if your were to ask "Pepsi or Coke" for their beverage preferences.
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First, I like pepsi.
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Because I like taste.
This can naturally follow your previous though and be one complete sentence. Because I like the taste. Because I like the taste. |
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This is moderate sweetness and fresh!!
"This is a moderate sweetness" doesn't quite work. Here I changed it to "it has" to more accurately reflect that you are referring to the taste of Pepsi.
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But I like not only pepsi also coca cola!
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coca cola is very delicious when I was tired.
"When I was tired" sounds like you have only ever had one Coca-Cola and that you drank it while you were tired. Changed it to "when I'm tired".
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This make me happy! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This makes me happy! This makes me happy! |
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Which do you like pepsi or coca cola?
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