Feb. 27, 2025
Since i was a child, i was obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live style. When i start grow up, this obssesion starts going to another way, when i start to study about this in school, so i star to see this subject in a otherwise. For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty. I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so much things about the history about britsh royalty.
I have 15 years old, and i want to learn english now to have a great future beeing a law, and travel all word. Please correct my text.
Desde quando eu era criança, eu era obcecada por castelos, princesas, reis, rainhas, e tudo sobre esse estilo de vida. Quando eu comecei a crescer, essa obsessão começou a ir para outro caminho, quando eu comecei a estudar sobre isso na escola, então eu comecei a ver esse assunto de outra forma. Para mim, tudo que abrange o assunto de história, tem minha atenção, mas especificamente a história da realeza. eu amo tudo sobre a Princesa Diana, Imperatriz Sissi, era vitoriana, e muitas noutras coisas sobre a história sobre a realeza britânica.
Eu tenho 15 anos, e eu quero aprender inglês agora para ter um bom futuro sendo uma advogada, e viajar o mundo. Por favor corrijam meu texto.
aAn obssession callingabout history
An obsession about history
Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute thistheir livfe style.
Since I was a child, I have been obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens and their life style.
When i start grow upI became older, this obssession startsed going to another way, when ia different way, as I started to study about this in school, so iI started to see this subject in a anotherwise way.
When I became older, this obsession started going a different way, as I started to study about this in school, so I started to see this subject in a another way.
For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, havethat has to do with history grabs my attention, but specifically, the history about royalty.
For me, everything that has to do with history grabs my attention, but specifically, history about royalty.
I love everything about lLady Diana, eEmpress Sissi, thé Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof the British rRoyalt Family.
I love everything about Lady Diana, Empress Sissi, thé Victorian era, and so many things about the history of the British Royal Family.
I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a law,yer and and travelling all over the world.
I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future being a lawyer and and travelling all over the world.
Please correct my text.
Since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live festyle.
Since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and all about this lifestyle.
When iI started growing up, this obssession startsed going to another way, when iI start to study about this in school, so iI start to see this subject in a notherwise way.
When I started growing up, this obsession started going another way, when I start to study about this in school, I start to see this subject in another way.
For me, everything it'sthat covers the subjects History, haves my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
For me, everything that covers the subject History has my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bBritsh royalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so many things about the history about Britsh royalty.
I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a lawyer, and travel all word.
I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future being a lawyer, and travel all word.
a obsseAn Obsession cCalling hed History
An Obsession Called History
1. A rule to remember: when a word starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, or u), then use "an" rather than "a"
SEver since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and alleverything aboute thisat live festyle.
Ever since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything about that lifestyle.
I think "ever since" is better than "since" in this case, because you are describing something that
When i startAs I groew up, this obssession startsed going toin another way, wdirection. When iI started to study about this in school, so i starI began to see thise subject in a otherwisenew way.
As I grew up, this obsession started going in another direction. When I started to study this in school, I began to see the subject in a new way.
Saying that you "started to [verb]" so frequently is not needed. Here are some alternatives that will help your words flow more naturally:
A. "When I started growing up" -> "As I grew up"
B. "this obsession started going in another direction" -> "this obsession evolved" OR "this obsession changed direction"
C. "When I started to study" -> "While I was studying" OR "As I was studying"
For me, everything it's covern the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but especifically the history aboutof royalty.
For me, everything in the subject of history has my attention, especially the history of royalty.
1. There is no need to capitalize school subjects (with the exception of languages).
2. "especially" or "particularly" is a better choice than "specifically" because you are pointing out something you like more than usual.
I love everything about lLady Diana, eEmpress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof British royalty.
I love everything about Lady Diana, Empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so many things about the history of British royalty.
1. Capitalize noble/royal titles when they come before someone's name (Queen Mary).
2. The word "royalty" does not need to be capitalized in this sentence. However, if you write about the "Royal Family" then you would capitalize :)
I haveam 15 years old, and i. I want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and to travel allthe whole world.
I am 15 years old. I want to learn English now to have a great future as a lawyer and to travel the whole world.
1. Remember to always capitalize "I" in English. This is a difference between English and Portuguese (where "eu" is not capitalized).
2. Always capitalize the names of languages.
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Great job! I am also really interested in history. You could read books about the Royal Family in English to improve your language skills even more while also studying your favorite topic!
aAn obssession callingwith history
An obsession with history
Since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and alleverything aboute this live festyle.
Since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything about this lifestyle.
The word "I" is always capitalized.
Obsessed about -> obsessed with.
Lifestyle is one word.
When i startI groew up, this obssession starts going to another way, when i start to study about thised to change as I began to study it in school, so iI started to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently.
When I grew up, this obsession started to change as I began to study it in school, so I started to see this subject differently.
start -> started because you're talking about actions in the past.
start -> began to avoid repetition.
For me, everything it's covered by the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but specifically the history aboutof royalty.
For me, everything covered by the subject of history has my attention, but specifically the history of royalty.
You could also say "especially" instead of "specifically" but both are fine.
I love everything about ladyPrincess Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so much other things about the history aboutof british royalty.
I love everything about Princess Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so much other things about the history of british royalty.
She's most commonly called "Princess Diana".
I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a lawyer, and to travel allthe world.
I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future as a lawyer, and to travel the world.
To say your age, you can say "I am 15 years old" or in casual conversation just "I'm 15".
Please correct my text.
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Very good! Good luck with your English studies.
a obsseAn Obsession cCalling hed History
An Obsession Called History
In English, all words in a title are capitalized.
Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd aboutsed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and all abouteeverything related to this live festyle.
Since I was a child, I have been obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything related to this lifestyle.
When iI start growing up, this obssession starts going to another way, wevolved. When iI started to study about this in school, so i starI began to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently.
When I start growing up, this obsession evolved. When I started to study about this in school, I began to see this subject differently.
For me, everything it's coverrelated to the subjects of History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
For me, everything related to the subject of History have my attention, but specifically history about royalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof the British rRoyalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so many things about the history of the British Royalty.
I have am15 years old, and iI want to learn english now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and travel allling around the world.
I am15 years old, and I want to learn english now to have a great future as a lawyer and travelling around the world.
Please correct my text.
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There were several minor errors that were probably just typos. Be careful about capitalization. For example, I is always in capitals in English.
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a obssesion calling history
In English, all words in a title are capitalized.
1. A rule to remember: when a word starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, or u), then use "an" rather than "a"
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Since i was a child, i was obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live style.
Since
Since The word "I" is always capitalized. Obsessed about -> obsessed with. Lifestyle is one word.
I think "ever since" is better than "since" in this case, because you are describing something that
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When i start grow up, this obssesion starts going to another way, when i start to study about this in school, so i star to see this subject in a otherwise.
When
When start -> started because you're talking about actions in the past. start -> began to avoid repetition.
Saying that you "started to [verb]" so frequently is not needed. Here are some alternatives that will help your words flow more naturally: A. "When I started growing up" -> "As I grew up" B. "this obsession started going in another direction" -> "this obsession evolved" OR "this obsession changed direction" C. "When I started to study" -> "While I was studying" OR "As I was studying"
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For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
For me, everything
For me, everything You could also say "especially" instead of "specifically" but both are fine.
For me, everything i 1. There is no need to capitalize school subjects (with the exception of languages). 2. "especially" or "particularly" is a better choice than "specifically" because you are pointing out something you like more than usual.
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I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so much things about the history about britsh royalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so m
I love everything about She's most commonly called "Princess Diana".
I love everything about 1. Capitalize noble/royal titles when they come before someone's name (Queen Mary). 2. The word "royalty" does not need to be capitalized in this sentence. However, if you write about the "Royal Family" then you would capitalize :)
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so m
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I have 15 years old, and i want to learn english now to have a great future beeing a law, and travel all word.
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I To say your age, you can say "I am 15 years old" or in casual conversation just "I'm 15".
I 1. Remember to always capitalize "I" in English. This is a difference between English and Portuguese (where "eu" is not capitalized). 2. Always capitalize the names of languages.
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