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a obssesion calling history

Since i was a child, i was obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live style. When i start grow up, this obssesion starts going to another way, when i start to study about this in school, so i star to see this subject in a otherwise. For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty. I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so much things about the history about britsh royalty.

I have 15 years old, and i want to learn english now to have a great future beeing a law, and travel all word. Please correct my text.


Desde quando eu era criança, eu era obcecada por castelos, princesas, reis, rainhas, e tudo sobre esse estilo de vida. Quando eu comecei a crescer, essa obsessão começou a ir para outro caminho, quando eu comecei a estudar sobre isso na escola, então eu comecei a ver esse assunto de outra forma. Para mim, tudo que abrange o assunto de história, tem minha atenção, mas especificamente a história da realeza. eu amo tudo sobre a Princesa Diana, Imperatriz Sissi, era vitoriana, e muitas noutras coisas sobre a história sobre a realeza britânica.

Eu tenho 15 anos, e eu quero aprender inglês agora para ter um bom futuro sendo uma advogada, e viajar o mundo. Por favor corrijam meu texto.

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a obssesion calling history


a obsseAn Obsession cCalling hed History An Obsession Called History

In English, all words in a title are capitalized.

aAn obssession callingwith history An obsession with history

a obsseAn Obsession cCalling hed History An Obsession Called History

1. A rule to remember: when a word starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, or u), then use "an" rather than "a"

aAn obssession callingabout history An obsession about history

Since i was a child, i was obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live style.


Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd aboutsed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and all abouteeverything related to this live festyle. Since I was a child, I have been obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything related to this lifestyle.

Since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and alleverything aboute this live festyle. Since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything about this lifestyle.

The word "I" is always capitalized. Obsessed about -> obsessed with. Lifestyle is one word.

SEver since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and alleverything aboute thisat live festyle. Ever since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and everything about that lifestyle.

I think "ever since" is better than "since" in this case, because you are describing something that

Since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live festyle. Since I was a child, I was obsessed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and all about this lifestyle.

Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute thistheir livfe style. Since I was a child, I have been obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens and their life style.

When i start grow up, this obssesion starts going to another way, when i start to study about this in school, so i star to see this subject in a otherwise.


When iI start growing up, this obssession starts going to another way, wevolved. When iI started to study about this in school, so i starI began to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently. When I start growing up, this obsession evolved. When I started to study about this in school, I began to see this subject differently.

When i startI groew up, this obssession starts going to another way, when i start to study about thised to change as I began to study it in school, so iI started to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently. When I grew up, this obsession started to change as I began to study it in school, so I started to see this subject differently.

start -> started because you're talking about actions in the past. start -> began to avoid repetition.

When i startAs I groew up, this obssession startsed going toin another way, wdirection. When iI started to study about this in school, so i starI began to see thise subject in a otherwisenew way. As I grew up, this obsession started going in another direction. When I started to study this in school, I began to see the subject in a new way.

Saying that you "started to [verb]" so frequently is not needed. Here are some alternatives that will help your words flow more naturally: A. "When I started growing up" -> "As I grew up" B. "this obsession started going in another direction" -> "this obsession evolved" OR "this obsession changed direction" C. "When I started to study" -> "While I was studying" OR "As I was studying"

When iI started growing up, this obssession startsed going to another way, when iI start to study about this in school, so iI start to see this subject in a notherwise way. When I started growing up, this obsession started going another way, when I start to study about this in school, I start to see this subject in another way.

When i start grow upI became older, this obssession startsed going to another way, when ia different way, as I started to study about this in school, so iI started to see this subject in a anotherwise way. When I became older, this obsession started going a different way, as I started to study about this in school, so I started to see this subject in a another way.

For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.


For me, everything it's coverrelated to the subjects of History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty. For me, everything related to the subject of History have my attention, but specifically history about royalty.

For me, everything it's covered by the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but specifically the history aboutof royalty. For me, everything covered by the subject of history has my attention, but specifically the history of royalty.

You could also say "especially" instead of "specifically" but both are fine.

For me, everything it's covern the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but especifically the history aboutof royalty. For me, everything in the subject of history has my attention, especially the history of royalty.

1. There is no need to capitalize school subjects (with the exception of languages). 2. "especially" or "particularly" is a better choice than "specifically" because you are pointing out something you like more than usual.

For me, everything it'sthat covers the subjects History, haves my attention, but specifically the history about royalty. For me, everything that covers the subject History has my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.

For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, havethat has to do with history grabs my attention, but specifically, the history about royalty. For me, everything that has to do with history grabs my attention, but specifically, history about royalty.

I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so much things about the history about britsh royalty.


I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof the British rRoyalty. I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so many things about the history of the British Royalty.

I love everything about ladyPrincess Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so much other things about the history aboutof british royalty. I love everything about Princess Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so much other things about the history of british royalty.

She's most commonly called "Princess Diana".

I love everything about lLady Diana, eEmpress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof British royalty. I love everything about Lady Diana, Empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so many things about the history of British royalty.

1. Capitalize noble/royal titles when they come before someone's name (Queen Mary). 2. The word "royalty" does not need to be capitalized in this sentence. However, if you write about the "Royal Family" then you would capitalize :)

I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bBritsh royalty. I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so many things about the history about Britsh royalty.

I love everything about lLady Diana, eEmpress Sissi, thé Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof the British rRoyalt Family. I love everything about Lady Diana, Empress Sissi, thé Victorian era, and so many things about the history of the British Royal Family.

I have 15 years old, and i want to learn english now to have a great future beeing a law, and travel all word.


I have am15 years old, and iI want to learn english now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and travel allling around the world. I am15 years old, and I want to learn english now to have a great future as a lawyer and travelling around the world.

I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a lawyer, and to travel allthe world. I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future as a lawyer, and to travel the world.

To say your age, you can say "I am 15 years old" or in casual conversation just "I'm 15".

I haveam 15 years old, and i. I want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and to travel allthe whole world. I am 15 years old. I want to learn English now to have a great future as a lawyer and to travel the whole world.

1. Remember to always capitalize "I" in English. This is a difference between English and Portuguese (where "eu" is not capitalized). 2. Always capitalize the names of languages.

I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a lawyer, and travel all word. I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future being a lawyer, and travel all word.

I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a law,yer and and travelling all over the world. I am 15 years old, and I want to learn English now to have a great future being a lawyer and and travelling all over the world.

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