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Today i have, my day started with ime waking up and doing the washing up. Today, my day started with me waking up and doing the washing up.

Today i have, my day started with i waking up and washing up. Today, my day started with waking up and washing up.

Today i have, my day started with ime waking up and washing up. Today, my day started with me waking and washing up.

You can omit the first "up", because it's repeated in "washing up".

Today i have my dayI started with imy day waking up and washing up. Today I started my day waking up and washing up.

Today i haveI started my day started with ia waking up and washingsh as soon as I got up. Today I started my day started with a wash as soon as I got up.

Next, I was doing many exercises and haved a short run outside. Next, I was doing many exercises and had a short run outside.

Next, I was anydid some exercises and havewent for a short run outside. Next, I did some exercises and went for a short run outside.

Next, I was did many exercises and haved a short run outside. Next, I did many exercises and had a short run outside.

"have" should be in the past tense.

Next I was anydid a few exercises and havewent on a short run outside. Next I did a few exercises and went on a short run outside.

Next I was anydid some exercises and haved a short run outside. Next I did some exercises and had a short run outside.

During my run, unfortunuatelly, I feltl on the road. During my run, unfortunately, I fell on the road.

During my run, unfortunuatelly, I feltl on the road. During my run, unfortunately, I fell on the road.

During my run, I unfortunuatelly I feltl on the road. During my run, I unfortunately fell on the road.

When used in the middle of a sentence, "unfortunately" will sound more natural after "I".

During my run, unfortunuatelly, I feltl on the road. During my run, unfortunately, I fell on the road.

During my run unfortunutelly I feltl on road. During my run unfortunutelly I fell on road.

But ithis inccident donidn't ruine my day. But this incident didn't ruin my day.

But it, this inccident donidn't ruine my day. But, this incident didn't ruin my day.

But ithis inccident donidn't ruine my day. But this incident didn't ruin my day.

"don't" should be in the past tense.

But ithis inccident donidn't ruine my day. But this incident didn't ruin my day.

But its inthis accident donidn’t ruine my day. But this accident didn’t ruin my day.

After that i have eating, I ate with my family, and of course i, I fed my cat. After that, I ate with my family, and of course, I fed my cat.

After that i have eating, I ate with my family, and of course i, I fed my cat. After that, I ate with my family, and of course, I fed my cat.

After that i have eating, I ate with my family, and of course iI fed my cat. After that, I ate with my family, and of course I fed my cat.

"have eating" should be in the past tense.

After that i have eating, I ate with my family, and of course iI fed my cat. After that, I ate with my family, and of course I fed my cat.

"I" should always be capitalized.

After that i have eatingI ate with my family, and of course iI fed my cat. After that I ate with my family, and of course I fed my cat.

Further iLater, I went to training in the gym with my friend. Later, I went training in the gym with my friend.

You could say "furthermore" but it's a bit more formal and doesn't fit well with the style of this piece of writing

Further imore, I went to training in the gym with my friend. Furthermore, I went to train in the gym with my friend.

Further iLater, I went to training in the gym with my friend. Later, I went to train in the gym with my friend.

Further iThen, I went to training in the gym with my friend. Then, I went to train in the gym with my friend.

Further iThen, I went tofor training in the gym with my friend. Then, I went for training in the gym with my friend.

After this hard training, we went to the cafe, where iI bought 1a croissant and 1a coffee. After this hard training, we went to the cafe, where I bought a croissant and a coffee.

After this hard training session, we went to the cafe, where iI bought 1a croissant and 1a coffee. After this hard training session, we went to the cafe, where I bought a croissant and a coffee.

After thisat hard training, we went to the cafe, where iI bought 1a croissant and 1a cup of coffee. After that hard training, we went to the cafe, where I bought a croissant and a cup of coffee.

"a" is more commonly used when there is only one object, and sounds more natural. Also, "coffee" is generally uncountable, so you must put a counter before it. People do say "a coffee", but that is colloquial. For now, adding the counter is good practice.

After this hard training, we went to the cafe, where iI bought 1a croissant and 1a coffee. After this hard training, we went to the cafe where I bought a croissant and a coffee.

After this hard training we went to the cafe, where iI bought 1a croisant and 1a coffee. After this hard training we went to the cafe, where I bought a croisant and a coffee.

Next i, I came home and took a shower. Next, I came home and took a shower.

Next i, I came back home and took a shower. Next, I came back home and took a shower.

Next i came, I returned home and took a shower., Next, I returned home and took a shower,

I'd prefer "returned" here.

Next i came, I returned home and took a shower. Next, I returned home and took a shower.

Next iI came home and took a shower. Next I came home and took a shower.

After whichthat, I walked with my dog and further Ithen took a nap. After that, I walked my dog and then took a nap.

After which, I walked with my dog and furthlater, I took a nap. After which, I walked my dog and later, I took a nap.

Aafter which I walked with my dog and further Ithen took a nap. after which I walked my dog and then took a nap.

"after which" generally appears in the middle of a sentence, instead of the front. I have edited the previous sentence to allow for this. Also, "walked my dog" is a set phrase. "walked with my dog" is not wrong, but less natural-sounding.

After which I walked with my dog and furthern, I took a nap. After which I walked my dog and then, I took a nap.

After which I walked with my dog and further Ithen took a nap. After which I walked with my dog and then took a nap.

After I took a nap I have spendingmy nap I spent time with my family watching thea movie about cowboys. After my nap I spent time with my family watching a movie about cowboys.

After I took a nap, I have spendingt time with my family watching thea movie about cowboys. After I took a nap, I spent time with my family watching a movie about cowboys.

After I took a nap I have spendingwoke up, I spent time with my family watching thea movie about cowboys. After I woke up, I spent time with my family watching a movie about cowboys.

Repeating "took a nap" is a bit much, since you'd already used that phrase in the sentence right before this one. Also, "have spending" should be in the past tense. Last, it should be "a movie" instead of "the movie", since this is the first time you are introducing the movie.

After I took a nap, I have spendingt time with my family watching thea movie about cowboys. After I took a nap, I spent time with my family watching a movie about cowboys.

After I took a nap I have spendingmy nap I spent time with my family watching thea movie about cowboys. After my nap I spent time with my family watching a movie about cowboys.

And it is aThat is the end of my day after that, and we all went to sleep. That is the end of my day, and we all went to sleep.

And it is athat was the end of my day after thatwhich, we all went to sleep. And that was the end of my day after which, we all went to sleep.

And it is aThat was the end of my day after thatnd we all went to sleep. That was the end of my day and we all went to sleep.

I omitted the first "and" because you have already used many adverbs and conjunctions at the start of sentences, which can quickly become repetitive. The sentence still works without it.

And it is at the end of mythe day, after that we all went to sleep. At the end of the day, we all went to sleep.

And it is and ofthat’s about my day as after that we all went to sleep. And that’s about my day as after that we all went to sleep.