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China has ten famous brands of tea, but only Anhui province has four out of them and they each are Lu'an GuaPian, Huangshan Maofeng, Taipin monkey chief and Keemun black tea. The first one is produced in the mid-east mountain areas of Anhui province and the last three are produced in the southern mountain areas of Anhui province. The first three are all green tea, but the last one is black tea. As to the difference between the two kinds of tea, there are four points below: first off, they have different manufacturing technology. Black tea is fermented, but green tea is not fermented. The second is that black tea contains thearubin. It has a function to dispel cold and warm stomach, but green tea contains caffeine and it can make people feel more refreshed. The third difference is about the anti-cancer effects. Based on some experiments, scientists consider that black tea has more anti-cancer functions. However, although I am not a tea person, I am proud of being a person from Anhui because it covers four famous tea brands out of the ten in China.

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The first one is produced in the mid-east mountain areas of Anhui province and the last three are produced in the southern mountain areas of Anhui province.

The first three are all green tea, but the last one is black tea.

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China has ten famous brands of tea, but only Anhui province has four out of them and they each arefour of which come from Anhui province. They're called Lu'an GuaPian, Huangshan Maofeng, Taipin monkey chief and Keemun black tea.

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Black tea is fermented, but green tea is not fermented.


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The second is that black tea contains thearubin.


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