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July 12, 2022

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I love the summer so much. The weather is so relax and warm the coolness wind in the air and the strong rain. I love summer two monts free from the school. In summer give it ice crem and soda and much of fun. It gives so much diffrent activities in summer like swimming , travel , go in the park, and many more. In summer is my Birtday on 31th august . But that is not all we traveled this summer to paris the capital of French . We have there many relatives and we was there not so long.

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I love the summer so much.

I love the summer so much.

the summer


tThe sSummer The Summer

In formal writing, we capitalize each word in the title, except for conjunctions and prepositions

tThe summer The summer

tThe summer The summer

I love the summer so much.


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The weather is so relax and warm the coolness wind in the air and the strong rain.


The weather is so relaxing and warm: the coolness of wind in the air and the strong rain. The weather is so relaxing and warm: the coolness of wind in the air and the strong rain.

The weather is so relaxed and warm the coolness wind in the air, except for when storms bring a cool wind and the strongavy rain. The weather is so relaxed and warm, except for when storms bring a cool wind and heavy rain.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. To me it makes the most sense if you tie the cool wind and heavy rain to storms, since otherwise it contradicts the previous statement about the weather being relaxed and warm. We say rain is "heavy," not "strong."

The weather is so relax and warming, with the warmth and the coolness wind in the air, and the strong rain. The weather is so relaxing, with the warmth and the cool wind in the air, and the strong rain.

The weather is so relaxnice and warm the coolness . The wind in the air is cool and there are strong rain.s. The weather is so nice and warm. The wind in the air is cool and there are strong rains.

I love summer two monts free from the school.


I love summer: two months free from the school. I love summer: two months free from school.

I love summer because it means two months free from the school. I love summer because it means two months free from the school.

"I love summer" is a full statement and thus needs a conjunction (or a colon) to link it with "two months free from school."

I love the summer, two months free from the school. I love the summer, two months free from the school.

I lohave summer two months free from the school in the summer. I have two months free from school in the summer.

In summer give it ice crem and soda and much of fun.


In summer gi, I have it ice crem andam, soda, and mucha lot of fun. In summer, I have ice cream, soda, and a lot of fun.

In sSummer give ithas ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun. Summer has ice cream and soda and lots of fun.

Es gibt = "there is" in English in most cases; you could say "In summer there is," though "Summer has" sounds more natural

In summer give it, there’s ice cream and soda and muchlots of fun. In summer, there’s ice cream and soda and lots of fun.

In summer give it, you can buy ice cream and soda, and have so much of fun. In summer, you can buy ice cream and soda, and have so much fun.

It gives so much diffrent activities in summer like swimming , travel , go in the park, and many more.


It giveSummer has so muchany different activities in summer, like swimming , travel ling, go ing to the park, and many moreothers. Summer has so many different activities, like swimming, travelling, going to the park, and many others.

It givesThere are so much different activities in summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and many more. There are so much different activities in summer like swimming, traveling, going to the park, and many more.

one goes "to" the park, rather than "in"

It giveThere’s so muchany diffrent activities in summer, like swimming , traveling , go ing to the park, and many more. There’s so many diffrent activities in summer, like swimming, traveling , going to the park, and many more.

It givesThere are so muchany different activities in the summer like swimming , travel ing, go ing to the park, and manyuch more. There are so many different activities in the summer like swimming, traveling, going to the park, and much more.

In summer is my Birtday on 31th august .


In summer is my Birtday on 31th august . In summer is my Birtday on 31th august .

My birthday is in summer, on the 31st of August.

In summer is my Birtday on 31th aMy birthday is in summer, on August 31st. My birthday is in summer, on August 31st.

"birthday" is a common noun and is not capitalized, "August" is a proper noun and is capitalized. "thirty-first" = 31st (you can also just write August 31, it's more formal)

In summer, it is my Bbirthday on 31th aAugust . In summer, it is my birthday on 31th August .

In summer is mMy Bbirthday on 31th ais in the summer. It's August 31st. My birthday is in the summer. It's August 31st.

But that is not all we traveled this summer to paris the capital of French .


But that i's not all we traveled this summer: this summer, we travelled to pParis, the capital of Freanch e. But that's not all: this summer, we travelled to Paris, the capital of France.

But that is not all; we traveled this summer to pParis the capital of Freanch e. But that is not all; we traveled this summer to Paris the capital of France.

"But that is not all" and "we traveled this summer to Paris the capital of France." are both complete sentences, but they can be joined with a semicolon to indicate that one necessarily follows the other. French = the language, France = the country

But that is not all w. We traveled this summer to pParis, the capital of Freanche . But that is not all. We traveled this summer to Paris, the capital of France .

But that i's not all we traveled this summer, this summer, we also traveled to pParis, the capital city of Freanch e. But that's not all, this summer, we also traveled to Paris, the capital city of France.

We have there many relatives and we was there not so long.


We have there many relatives and we wasthere. We weren't there not sofor long. We have many relatives there. We weren't there for long.

Connecting them with "and" suggests that you didn't stay there for long because you have many relatives there.

We have there many relatives and we was there not sothere, but we were not there for very long. We have many relatives there, but we were not there for very long.

We have there many relatives there, and we waseren’t there not sofor very long. We have many relatives there, and we weren’t there for very long.

We have there many relatives and we was there notthere, and we had not been in so long. We have many relatives there, and we had not been in so long.

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