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Bad Thing

December 29, 2022
Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it for so long ?
I was infected with Covid 19. On that day. My throat was very dry. It was a very bad things. At night. I can't sleep in bed. I was dying of pain. I woke up many times during the night.

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December 29, 2022

I was dying of pain.

I woke up many times during the night.

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December 29, 2022

I was infected with Covid 19.

I was dying of pain.

I woke up many times during the night.

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Bad Thing

December 29, 2022

I was infected with Covid 19.

I was dying of pain.

I woke up many times during the night.

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Bad Thing


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A Bad Thing A Bad Thing

A Bad Thing A Bad Thing

This sounds more natural in the US for a title.

December 29, 2022


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Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it for so long ?


Long time no see, d. Do you know why I haven't updated it forposted an update here in so long ? Long time no see. Do you know why I haven't posted an update here in so long ?

Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it forin so long ? Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it in so long ?

Long time, no see, d. Do you know why I haven't updated itposted for so long ? Long time, no see. Do you know why I haven't posted for so long ?

Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated itwritten an entry here for so long ? Long time no see, do you know why I haven't written an entry here for so long ?

I was infected with Covid 19.


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I was infected with Covid OVID-19. I was infected with COVID-19.

if you want to be more casual, you could say "i got covid" or "i caught covid". in casual coversation, it's rare to hear someone say "i was infected with".

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I was infectedsick with Covid 19./I caught Covid 19. I was sick with Covid 19./I caught Covid 19.

What you wrote is ok, but I think these are better options.

On that day.


On that day, my throat was very dry (very sore?). On that day, my throat was very dry (very sore?).

On that day, my throat was very dry. On that day, my throat was very dry.

This is a sentence fragment so I add the next line to it.

On that day. On that day

My throat was very dry.


My throat was very dry.

Mmy throat was very dry. my throat was very dry.

It was a very bad things.


It was a very bad things. It was a very bad thing.

It was a very bad things. It was a very bad thing.

It was a very bad things. It was very bad.

It was a very bad things.situation at night. It was a very bad situation at night.

At night.


At night., I couldn’t sleep in my bed. At night, I couldn’t sleep in my bed.

At night I couldn't sleep. At night I couldn't sleep.

This is another sentence fragment. "can" is present tense while "could" is past tense.

At night.

I can't sleep in bed.


I can't sleep in bed.

I caouldn't sleep in bed. I couldn't sleep in bed.

I was dying of pain.


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I was dying of painin so much pain I felt I could die. I was in so much pain I felt I could die.

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I woke up many times during the night.


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