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May 18, 2021

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Summer is comming

In Japan, hot weather continues. The temperature is around 25 degrees. It is so hot compared with last year. I can't stand the weather, so I wore a tank top. But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn a tank top. I cannot wait for the coming summer. I love the season. For the season, I tan my skin and do weight training. Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon. After I went there, I always feel better. But the salon is very expensive. It takes 25$ per once, and I have to continue to go there, so my money will be gone. If I skipped going there, my skin couldn't keep the brown color. I have to make money for keeping brown skin.

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The temperature is around 25 degrees.

It is so hot compared with last year.

I cannot wait for the coming summer.

Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon.

But the salon is very expensive.

Summer is comming


Summer is comming Summer is coming

In Japan, hot weather continues.


In Japan, the hot weather continues. In Japan, the hot weather continues.

The temperature is around 25 degrees.


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It is so hot compared with last year.


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I can't stand the weather, so I wore a tank top.


I can't stand the wheather, so I wore a tank top. I can't stand the heat, so I wore a tank top.

But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn a tank top.


But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn adon't often wear tank tops. But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people don't often wear tank tops.

I cannot wait for the coming summer.


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I love the season.


I love the season. I love the season.

More common: "I love summer"

For the season, I tan my skin and do weight training.


For the seasonTo prepare for summer, I tan my skin and do weight training. To prepare for summer, I tan my skin and do weight training.

"I go tanning" is a more common way to say this

Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon.


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After I went there, I always feel better.


After I wentgo there, I always feel better. After I go there, I always feel better.

"After I went there (one time), I felt better", but "After I go there (as I often do), I always feel better" if you go more than once

But the salon is very expensive.


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It takes 25$ per once, and I have to continue to go there, so my money will be gone.


It takecosts $25$ per oncevisit, and I have to continue to go there, sokeep going, so soon my money will be gone. It costs $25 per visit, and I have to keep going, so soon my money will be gone.

If I skipped going there, my skin couldn't keep the brown color.


If I skipped going there, my skin cwouldn't keep the brown colorstay brown. If I skipped going, my skin wouldn't stay brown.

You don't need to say the "there" again, because you've already told us where you're talking about

I have to make money for keeping brown skin.


I have to make money for to keep my sking brown skin. I have to make money for to keep my skin brown.

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