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I originally planned to visit a spring festival market today, but I was still a little bit tired so I gave up.
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I originally planned to visit a spring festival market today, but I was still a little bit tired so I gave up.
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I originally planned to visit a spring festival market today, but I was still a little bit tired, so I gave up.
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I originally planned to visit a s{Spring fFestival | New Year’s} market today, but I was still a little bit tired so I gave up.
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Your original is fine, but “spring festival market” does sound awkward (many festivals include markets, so the two terms sound redundant unless the reader already knows that “Spring Festival” is a Chinese term for what we call “Chinese New Year” in the West), so I suggest replacing “spring festival” in your sentence.
I originally planned ton visiting a spring festival market today, but I was still a little bit tired so I gave up.
"Planned to visit" isn't wrong, but I think it sounds a little more natural this way.
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I originally planned to visit a spring festival market today, but I was still a little bit tired, so I gave up.
It makes more sense for you to be visiting a festival celebrating the beginning of spring than a “spring market festival”. While the festival may have been similar to a market, with vendors selling things at stalls, if it is called a festival, you should refer to it as a festival.
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This sentence is very close to natural sounding!
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