Jan. 20, 2021
Thousands of Colors
I visited a handcrafts exhibition today. Actually, I hadn't planned to go there, and found the place quite accidently. I was looking for a paint shop when a large duck sitting on a log drew my attention. When I got a bit closer, I noticed that the duck was taxidermied, and belonged to that small exhibition.
Even though the exhibition was fairly small, it was really tranquilizing. The colorful objects displayed there were just amazing.
I asked the attendant if it was possible to take pictures, and he kindly let me do it. I wish I could show you the pictures here. It was a really fun day!
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Thousands of Colors
I visited a handcrafts exhibition today. I visited a handcrafts exhibition today.
I don’t know the nature of the event, but “exhibit” or “fair” might be better here instead of “exhibition”.
Actually, I hadn't planned to go there, and found the place quite on accidently.
Actually, I hadn't planned to go there, and found the place quite on accident.
I was looking for a paint shop when a large duck sitting on a log drew my attention.
When I got a bit closer, I noticed that the duck was taxidermied, and belonged to that small exhibition.
Even though ithe exhibition was fairly small, it was really tranquilizingpeaceful.
Even though it was fairly small, it was really peaceful.
You’ve already mentioned the subject, so the reader knows what you’re talking about.
“Tranquilizing” sounds a bit odd here, as the first thing that comes to mind when read (at least for me) is tranquilizer darts.
The colorful objects displayed there were just amazing.
I asked the attendant if it was possible to take pictures, and he kindly let me do itso.
I asked the attendant if it was possible to take pictures, and he kindly let me do so.
You could also say, “and he kindly permitted it”.
I wish I could show you the pictures here.
It was a really fun day!
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Jan. 20, 2021
Thank you so much for the corrections.
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I visited a handcrafts exhibition today. I visited a handcrafts exhibition today. I visited a handcrafts exhibition today. I don’t know the nature of the event, but “exhibit” or “fair” might be better here instead of “exhibition”. |
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Actually, I hadn't planned to go there, and found the place quite accidently.
Actually, I hadn't planned to go there, and found the place quite on accident |
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I was looking for a paint shop when a large duck sitting on a log drew my attention. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I got a bit closer, I noticed that the duck was taxidermied, and belonged to that small exhibition. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though the exhibition was fairly small, it was really tranquilizing.
Even though it You’ve already mentioned the subject, so the reader knows what you’re talking about. “Tranquilizing” sounds a bit odd here, as the first thing that comes to mind when read (at least for me) is tranquilizer darts. |
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The colorful objects displayed there were just amazing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I asked the attendant if it was possible to take pictures, and he kindly let me do it.
I asked the attendant if it was possible to take pictures, and he kindly let me do You could also say, “and he kindly permitted it”. |
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I wish I could show you the pictures here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a really fun day! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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