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I've been known him for 34 years. I met him when I was at elementary school. Until graduating junior high school student, I grow up with him. My parents house and his one is very near. It's about 5 minutes on foot. The character is completely different between me and him. I'm shy and a bit blunt, and kind. He is ambitious, a bit nosy. Now, he work as sales person at steel trade company.

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It's about 5 minutes on foot.

It's about 5 minutes on foot.

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It's about 5 minutes on foot.

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Thank you for your advice and many useful phrase. But, understanding how to use "character" and "personality" is quite tough.

It's about 5 minutes on foot.

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I've been known him for 34 years.


I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I've been known him for 34 years. I've known him for 34 years.

I met him when I was at elementary school.


I met him when I was atin elementary school. I met him when I was in elementary school.

I met him when I was atin elementary school. I met him when I was in elementary school.

If you both are around the same age, it would be better to say "I met him when we were in elementary school". 他の伝え方: "I met him when I was an elementary school student."

I met him when I was atin elementary school. I met him when I was in elementary school.

Your sentence makes sense, but it's a little improper.

I met him when I was atin elementary school. I met him when I was in elementary school.

I met him when I was atwe were in elementary school together. I met him when we were in elementary school together.

I met him when I was (at/in) elementary school. I met him when I was (at/in) elementary school.

Until graduating junior high school student, I grow up with him.


Until graduating junior high school student, I groew up with him. Until graduating junior high school, I grew up with him.

Until graduating junior high school student, I grow up with himI grew up with him up until my junior high school graduation. I grew up with him up until my junior high school graduation.

For some reason, both your initial sentence and my correction sound like you stopped growing up together after graduation to me. Maybe something like "We grew up together even through my junior high school graduation" can work as well.

Up until graduatingour junior high school studentgraduation, I groew up with him. Up until our junior high school graduation, I grew up with him.

UI grew up with him until I graduatinged from junior high school student, I grow up with him. I grew up with him until I graduated from junior high school.

UWe grew up together until we graduatinged from junior high school student, I grow up with him. We grew up together until we graduated from junior high.

or We grew up together until we graduated from junior high school.

Until graduating junior high school student, I groew up with him. Until graduating junior high school student, I grew up with him.

My parents house and his one is very near.


My parents house and his one isare very near. My parents house and his are very near.

My parents' house and his one isare very near each other. My parents' house and his are very near each other.

他の伝え方: "His house is near my parents' house." "My parents' house and his house are close by each other."

My parents' house and his one is very neaare very close to each other. My parents' house and his are very close to each other.

You can also say: "His house is very close to my parents'."

My parents' house and his one isare very near each other. My parents' house and his are very near each other.

MHis and my parents' house and his one is very neames are very close to each other. His and my parents' homes are very close to each other.

His and my parents' houses are very near.

My parents' house and his one is very neahouse are very close to each other. My parents' house and his house are very close to each other.

It's about 5 minutes on foot.


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It's about 5 minutes to get to on foot. It's about 5 minutes to get to on foot.

The character is completely different between me and him.


TheHis character ishas become completely different between me and him. His character has become completely different.

The character isOur personalities are completely different between me and himfrom each other. Our personalities are completely different from each other.

Using "character" here sounds strange. 他の伝え方: "His personality and mine are completely different."

The character isOur personalities are completely different between me and himus. Our personalities are completely different between us.

The character isHowever, we have completely different between me and himpersonalities. However, we have completely different personalities.

The character isOur personalities are completely different between me and him. Our personalities are completely different.

or My personality is completely different than his. His personality is completely different than mine.

I'm shy and a bit blunt, and kind.


I'm shy and, a bit blunt, and kind. I'm shy, a bit blunt, and kind.

I'm shy and, a bit blunt, and kind. I'm shy, a bit blunt, and kind.

The extra "and" isn't necessary here.

I'm shy and, a bit blunt, and kind. I'm shy, a bit blunt, and kind.

I'm shy and a bit blunt, andbut I think I'm also kind. I'm shy and a bit blunt, but I think I'm also kind.

I'm shy and, a bit blunt, and kind. I'm shy, a bit blunt, and kind.

I'm shy and, a bit blunt, and kind. I'm shy, a bit blunt, and kind.

He is ambitious, a bit nosy.


He is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He is ambitious and a bit nosy.

He is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He is ambitious and a bit nosy.

He is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He is ambitious, and a bit nosy.

He, on the other hand, is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He, on the other hand, is ambitious and a bit nosy.

He is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He is ambitious and a bit nosy.

He is ambitious, and a bit nosy. He is ambitious and a bit nosy.

Now, he work as sales person at steel trade company.


Now, he work as a sales person at a steel tradeing company. Now, he work as a sales person at a steel trading company.

Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trade company. Now, he works as a salesperson at a steel trade company.

Now, he works as a sales person at a steel tradeing company. Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trading company.

Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trade company. Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trade company.

Now, he works as a sales person at a steel tradeing company. Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trading company.

やっぱり。

Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trade company. Now, he works as a sales person at a steel trade company.

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