Sept. 6, 2024
Hi, dear friend!
I like your interest about my travelling.
Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom - if husband is dead, his wife burn with him!
Yes, my way go across the jungle - I am so scary to see scorpion or snake.
I always dream about travel by an elephant - once in my childhood I rode a horse.
Which country do you want to visit next?
I like your interest aboutin my travelling.
I like your interest in my travel.
Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haves an old horror custom -; if a husband is dead, his wife burns with him!
Yesterday, I learned that India has an old horror custom; if a husband is dead, his wife burns with him!
Yes, my way goMy path cuts across the jungle -. I am so scary toed that I will see a scorpion or a snake.
My path cuts across the jungle. I am so scared that I will see a scorpion or a snake.
I always dream aboutt of travelling by an elephant - once during my childhood, I rode a horse.
I always dreamt of travelling by an elephant - once during my childhood, I rode a horse.
Which/what country do you want to visit next? Which/what country do you want to visit next?
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A Few Words About India
Hi, dear friend!
I like your to show interests about my travellings.
I like you to show interests about my travels.
Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom -: if the husband is dead, his wife burns with him!
Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom: if the husband is dead, his wife burns with him!
Yes, on my way go across the jungle -, I amwas so scaryed to see scorpions or snakes.
Yes, on my way across the jungle, I was so scared to see scorpions or snakes.
I would keep the verbs in a consistent tense here. Use the past tense consistently in this sentence.
I always dream about traveling by an elephant - o. Once in my childhood, I rode a horse.
I always dream about traveling by an elephant. Once in my childhood, I rode a horse.
Do you mean that you want to travel by riding an elephant or travel besides an elephant?
Which country do you want to visit next?
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I likappreciate your interest aboutin my travellings.
I appreciate your interest in my travels.
Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haved an old horrorhorrible old custom - ifwhen the husband is deadied, his wife burned with him!
Yesterday, I learned that India had an horrible old custom - when the husband died, his wife burned with him!
Yes, my way goI am going across the jungle - I am so scaryed to see a scorpion or snake.
Yes, I am going across the jungle - I am so scared to see a scorpion or snake.
I always dream aboutof travelling by an elephant - once in my childhood Ias a child I once rode a horse.
I always dream of travelling by elephant - as a child I once rode a horse.
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Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom - if husband is dead, his wife burn with him!
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Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom
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Yes, my way go across the jungle - I am so scary to see scorpion or snake.
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Yes, on my way I would keep the verbs in a consistent tense here. Use the past tense consistently in this sentence.
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I always dream about travel by an elephant - once in my childhood I rode a horse.
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I always dream about traveling by an elephant Do you mean that you want to travel by riding an elephant or travel besides an elephant?
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