July 30, 2025
One day more
Hey everybody, I dream with publication of my book date, but it's early to that.
However I hope see these day and hopefully somebody will make a movie of this book.
You know? I am not an experienced writter but I know this book is good because when I let read so pages to my family, they inmediately conect with this story.
is still early to speak about this, because I am halfway there but I will reach my goal, I'm sure of it.
I constantly dream what that day will be like, wille, I going to write one page more, one day more.
Bye
Un dia mas
Hola a todos, sueño con la fecha de publicación de mi libro, pero es temprano para eso.
Sin embargo espero ver ese dia con la esperanza de que alguien haga una pelicula basada en el libro.
Saben? yo no soy un escritor experimentado pero se que este libro es bueno porque cuando les permito a mis familiares leer algunas paginas, ellos se conectan de inmediato con esta historia.
Es temprano aun para hablar de esto porque estoy a medio camino, pero alcanzare mi meta, estoy seguro.
Constantemente sueño como sera ese dia, mientras tanto, voy a escribir yna pagina mas, un dia mas.
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One day more day
One more day
Hey everybody, I dream with publication of my book dateof the day my book is published, but it's too early tofor that.
Hey everybody, I dream of the day my book is published, but it's too early for that.
"Dream of/about" is the correct phrase
"Day" is more general than "date" so it's more often used
However, I hope to see theseis day, and hopefully somebody will make a movie out of this book.
However, I hope to see this day, and hopefully somebody will make a movie out of this book.
Comma after "however"
"Make a movie out of" or "make a movie based on"
You know?
I am not an experienced writter, but I know this book is good because when I let my family read some pages to my family, they inmmediately connected with thise story.
I am not an experienced writer, but I know this book is good because when I let my family read some pages, they immediately connected with the story.
It is still early to speak about this, because I am (only) halfway there, but I will reach my goal, I'm sure of it.
It is still early to speak about this because I am (only) halfway there, but I will reach my goal, I'm sure of it.
"Only" as a suggestion to add more emphasis that you're not done
I constantly dream about what that day will be like, wille, I going to write one page more, one day morein the meantime, I'm going to write one more page, one more day.
I constantly dream about what that day will be like, in the meantime, I'm going to write one more page, one more day.
"While" is used as a conjunction, "meanwhile/in the meantime" are used as adverbs
Bye
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You seem really passionate about your book, I hope everything goes well with it and you can achieve your dreams 🙂
Aug. 1, 2025
thanks friend your words and corrections are great.
One day more day
One more day
dont think in spanish grammar, think in english grammar
Hey everybody, I dream with publication of my book date'm excited for my book to get published, but it's too early to that.
Hey everybody, I'm excited for my book to get published, but it's too early
HoweverAlso, I hope I can live to see these day and hopefully somebody will make a movie of this bookof my book being turned into a movie.
Also, I hope I can live to see the day of my book being turned into a movie.
However = contrasting the previous sentence
Also = more info
I am not an experienced writter, but I know this book is good because when I let read some pages to my family, they inmediately conect with this story.resonnate with it
I am not an experienced writer, but I know this book is good because when I read some pages to my family, they resonnate with it
iIs still early to speak about this, because? I am halfway there but I will surely reach my goal, I'm sure of it.
Is still early to speak about this? I am halfway there but I will surely reach my goal.
I constantly dream what that day will be like, wille, I going tohile I'm writeing one page more, one day more.extra page, while each day passes.
I constantly dream what that day will be like, while I'm writing one extra page, while each day passes.
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gl, hope u make a million usd
July 31, 2025
thanks a lot
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Hey everybody, I dream with publication of my book date, but it's early to that.
Hey everybody, I
Hey everybody, I dream "Dream of/about" is the correct phrase "Day" is more general than "date" so it's more often used |
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However I hope see these day and hopefully somebody will make a movie of this book.
However = contrasting the previous sentence Also = more info
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I am not an experienced writter but I know this book is good because when I let read so pages to my family, they inmediately conect with this story.
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is still early to speak about this, because I am halfway there but I will reach my goal, I'm sure of it.
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I constantly dream what that day will be like, wille, I going to write one page more, one day more.
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I constantly dream about what that day will be like, "While" is used as a conjunction, "meanwhile/in the meantime" are used as adverbs |
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