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Today I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow. I felt that I will mess up. Everything today just made me exhausted. Nevertheless, there was still something good happening. That was I got a TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated. Additionally, it also passed exchanging abroad threshold for English. It's a great encouragement to me!
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Today I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow.
I felthought that I willould mess up.
I thought that I would mess up.
"I thought" is more common to say in the US. This sentence is subjunctive case so that's why we use "would" instead of "will" here.
Everything today just made me feel exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted.
Nevertheless, there was still something good which happeninged.
Nevertheless, there was still something good which happened.
Receiving the TOEIC score is a singular event which happened in the past so this sentence is simple past tense.
That was I got aI received my TOEIC score, and it was higher than I had anticipated.
I received my TOEIC score and it was higher than I had anticipated.
Congratulations!
This is more how'd we say it in the US.
Or more commonly used,
I received my TOEIC score and it was higher than I had expected.
Additionally, it also passed exchanging abroad thresholdIt also exceeded the threshold for international exchange programs for English.
It also exceeded the threshold for international exchange programs for English.
Use either "additionally" or "also" but not both in the same phrase since they mean the same thing.
or, less commonly,
Additionally, it exceeded the threshold for international exchange programs for English.
It's a great encouragement to me feel so encouraged by it!
I feel so encouraged by it!
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Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!
Jan. 5, 2023
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Today I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow.
I felt that I will mess up.
Everything today just made me feel exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted.
Nevertheless, there was still something good happening.
ThaIt was that I got a TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated.
It was that I got a TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated.
Additionally, it also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English. Additionally, it also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English.
It's a great encouragement to me!
It's great encouragement to me!
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!
Today, I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow.
Today, I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow.
I feelt that I will mess up.
I feel that I will mess up.
That was I got amy TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated.
That was I got my TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated.
Additionally, itI also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English.
Additionally, I also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English.
It's a great encouragement tofor me!
It's great encouragement for me!
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great job!
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!
Today I spent the whole day preparingstudying to be prepared for three subjects for tomorrow.
Today I spent the whole day studying to be prepared for three subjects for tomorrow.
I felt that I willel like I am going to mess up.
I feel like I am going to mess up.
Nevertheless, there was still something good that happeninged.
Nevertheless, there was still something good that happened.
That was I got amy TOEIC score, and it was higher than I had anticipated.
That was I got my TOEIC score, and it was higher than I had anticipated.
It's a greatly encouragementing to me!
It's greatly encouraging to me!
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much!
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Today I spent the whole day preparing three subjects for tomorrow.
Today I spent the whole day
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I felt that I will mess up.
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I feel This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Everything today just made me exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted. Everything today just made me feel exhausted. |
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Nevertheless, there was still something good happening.
Nevertheless, there was still something good that happen This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Nevertheless, there was still something good which happen Receiving the TOEIC score is a singular event which happened in the past so this sentence is simple past tense. |
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That was I got a TOEIC score, and it was higher than I anticipated.
That was I got
That was I got
Congratulations! This is more how'd we say it in the US. Or more commonly used, I received my TOEIC score and it was higher than I had expected. |
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Additionally, it also passed exchanging abroad threshold for English.
Additionally, Additionally, it also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English. Additionally, it also passed the exchanging abroad threshold for English.
Use either "additionally" or "also" but not both in the same phrase since they mean the same thing. or, less commonly, Additionally, it exceeded the threshold for international exchange programs for English. |
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It's a great encouragement to me!
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