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Feminism was a production of the last two centenaries and is popular nowadays in society. It is a significant symbol of females fighting for freedom and equality. From the 18th century, women used their pen to fight for equal rights and moaned unfair treatment starting in British. From the early 19th century, women had fought for their right to vote and election. Then in the early 20th century, Engerland women finally had achieved legal and civil equality. In the historical big picture, feminism activities had gained uncountable achievement and success to approach equality between different genders. But this triumph of feminism was flourishing in the West, instead of the East. There are many reasons, which could analyze why feminism is wide-spreading in the West. Comparing the East countries, such as China and India, people could through different angles understand that the East countries could not be a hotbed of feminist’ ideas. For example, historical religions, domestic culture, and social structure could be one of the elements to influence the spreading of feminism. Under those influences, the core of feminists is having to mutate and have been a misunderstanding by people. While feminism is flushing in the United States, it is sagging in China and India.


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Feminism was a production of the last two centenaries and is popular nowadays in society.


Feminism wais a production of the last two centenauries and is popular nowadaysthat is now a powerful force in society. Feminism is a production of the last two centuries that is now a powerful force in society.

It is a significant symbol of females fighting for freedom and equality.


It is a significant symbol of female's main focus is fighting for the freedom and equality of women. It's main focus is fighting for the freedom and equality of women.

From the 18th century, women used their pen to fight for equal rights and moaned unfair treatment starting in British.


From theStarting in 18th century, women used their pen to fight for equal rights and moaned unfair treatment starting in British Britain, women wrote and protested in support of equal rights and to criticize their unfair treatment. Starting in 18th century Britain, women wrote and protested in support of equal rights and to criticize their unfair treatment.

From the early 19th century, women had fought for their right to vote and election.


FromStarting in the early 19th century, women had fought for their right to vote and electionin the suffrage movement. Starting in the early 19th century, women fought for their right to vote in the suffrage movement.

Then in the early 20th century, Engerland women finally had achieved legal and civil equality.


Then in the early 20th century, Engerlandlish women finally had achieved legal and civil equality. Then in the early 20th century, English women finally achieved legal and civil equality.

In the historical big picture, feminism activities had gained uncountable achievement and success to approach equality between different genders.


In the historical big picture, feminismt activities had gained uncountconsiderable achievements and succprogress to approachwards equality between different genders. In the historical big picture, feminist activities had gained considerable achievements and progress towards equality between genders.

But this triumph of feminism was flourishing in the West, instead of the East.


But this triumph of feminism was flourishingoccurred only in the West, instead ofnot the East. But this triumph of feminism occurred only in the West, not the East.

There are many reasons, which could analyze why feminism is wide-spreading in the West.


There are many reasons, which one could analyze as to why feminism is wide-spreadingpopular in the West. There are many reasons one could analyze as to why feminism is popular in the West.

Comparing the East countries, such as China and India, people could through different angles understand that the East countries could not be a hotbed of feminist’ ideas.


Comparing the East countries, such as China and India, pPeople could throughuse different angles to understand that thewhy feminist ideas are relatively unpopular in Eastern countries could not be a hotbed of feminist’ ideassuch as China and India. People could use different angles to understand why feminist ideas are relatively unpopular in Eastern countries such as China and India.

For example, historical religions, domestic culture, and social structure could be one of the elements to influence the spreading of feminism.


For example, historical religions, domestic culture, and social structure could be one of the elements to influenceall have played a role in limiting the spreading of feminism. For example, religion, culture, and social structure could all have played a role in limiting the spread of feminism.

Under those influences, the core of feminists is having to mutate and have been a misunderstanding by people.


Under those influences, the core of feminists is having to mutate and have been am has been challenged and misunderstandingood by people. Under those influences, the core of feminism has been challenged and misunderstood by people.

While feminism is flushing in the United States, it is sagging in China and India.


While feminism is fluourishing in the United States, it is staggnating in China and India. While feminism is flourishing in the United States, it is stagnating in China and India.

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