As soon as he got home, As soon as he got home

Mmy son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip. my son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip.

MAs soon as he got home, my son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip. As soon as he got home, my son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip.

The title stands alone, it doesn't read well to have it flow into the first sentence, so better to repeat it here

Mmy son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip. my son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip.

After a comma we don't use capital letters.

I was surprised by how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had. I was surprised by how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had.

I was surprised by how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had. I was surprised by how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had.

I was surprised at how quickly he did that, because I have always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and againrepeatedly after every trip we have had. I was surprised at how quickly he did, because I have always had to tell him to unpack his bags repeatedly after every trip we have had.

I was surprised how quickly he did that because I alwaysusually hadve to tell him to unpack his bags again andover and over again after every trip we've had. I was surprised how quickly he did that because I usually have to tell him to unpack over and over again after every trip we've had.

I was surprised at how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had together. I was surprised at how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had together.

Does this phenomenon mean thatmean he has grown? Does this mean he has grown?

Found the use of phenomenon here a bit too formal and quite frankly verbose

Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown up? Does this mean that he has grown up?

Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown? Does this mean that he has grown?

I think phenomenon is usually used for nature/science (ex: natural phenomena 自然現象)

Or was it just a transient mood for that? Or was it just a transient mood?

Or justwas he in a transient mood for that? Or was he in a transient mood for that?

Or just a transient mood for that? Or just a transient mood?

Or was it just a transient mood for thatemporary mood? Or was it just a temporary mood?

Or just a transientwas he just in the mood for that? Or was he just in the mood for that?

However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who wasseemed somewhat different today. However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who seemed somewhat different today.

However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today, all the more. I just felt that I loved my son, who was somewhat different today, all the more.

HoweverWhatever it was, I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today. Whatever it was, I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.

However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today. However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.