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1/9 I could go on my way ato work. 1/9 I could go on my way to work.

Or "I could then continue on my way to work".

1/9 I could go Then I went my way ato work. 1/9 Then I went my way to work.

Unless there was any reason to expect you couldn't go to work, I wouldn't write "could" here.

I cooked a dinner and take relax at night. I cooked a dinner and relax at night.

You can also say "I cooked dinner".

I cooked a dinner and take relaxed at night. I cooked dinner and relaxed at night.

1/10 I could received some sweets during my work at the office .｡. 1/10 I received some sweets during my work at the office .｡.

"I could receive" probably means "I had permission to receive..." I would say "I received them".

1/10 I could received some sweets during mywhile at work at the office .｡. 1/10 I received some sweets while at work at the office .｡.

1/8 I was suddenly keen on editing in my house in the morning. 1/8 I was suddenly keen on editing in my house in the morning.

Do you mean that you were doing some editing (of documents) in the house, or that you wanted to organize some things at home? You could say, then, "...on straightening up my house..."

1/8 I was suddenly keen on editing my house in the morning. 1/8 I was suddenly keen on editing my house in the morning.

I agree with the other commenter, "edit" here is not clear. If you mean "change" your house in some way, I think you should be specific, like "tidying up", "moving around the furniture", "decorating", etc.

Afterwards, I could refresh by drinkthe bar at thea cafe. Afterwards, I could refresh by the bar at a cafe.

You would use "the bar" if there's only one bar, and use "a cafe" vs "the cafe" because you hadn't referenced it yet.

Afterwards, I couldhad the chance to refresh byat the drink bar at the cafe. Afterwards, I had the chance to refresh at the drink bar at the cafe.

"Could" or "was able to" is possible here, but it sounds a little awkward.

:*☆ 1/11 I could relax at home after work:) 1/12 I could cook and relax after work at home in theat night:) 1/13 I could feel refreshed by a muscle conditioning class in the morning. :*☆ 1/11 I could relax at home after work:) 1/12 I could cook and relax after work at home at night:) 1/13 I could feel refreshed by a muscle conditioning class in the morning.

Please note "at night".

:*☆ 1/11 I could relax at home after work:) 1/12 I could cook and relax after work at home in theat night:) 1/13 I could refreshedid bmy muscle conditioning class in the morning and felt refreshed. :*☆ 1/11 I could relax at home after work:) 1/12 I could cook and relax after work at home at night:) 1/13 I did my muscle conditioning class in the morning and felt refreshed.

A stylist made a nice hair style for me to see thea live show in the evening ! A stylist made a nice hair style for me to see a live show in the evening !

Or "A stylist styled my hair nicely".

A stylist madegave me a nice hair style for me, so I'm ready to see thea live show in the evening ! A stylist gave me a nice hair style, so I'm ready to see a live show in the evening !

I understand the meaning, but it's a little more clear if you add something like "so I'm ready for the live show", or "so I'll look good at the live show".

Also I healed by acupuncture on my face before going to a live house. Also I healed by acupuncture on my face before going to a live house.

I would say "I received an acupuncture treatment".

Also I healed bygot an acupuncture treatment on my face before going to livehousthe live show venue. Also I got an acupuncture treatment on my face before going to the live show venue.

If you want to say the place where a show or event happens, you can say venue. If it's literally a house, then "house" is okay.

Afterwards,I had a yummy lunch at yummya soba restaurant and takehad a hair cut. Afterwards,I had a yummy lunch at a soba restaurant and had a haircut.

I would put "yummy" with lunch, vs. the soba restaurant.

Afterwards, I had a lunch at a yummy soba restaurant and takegot a hair cut. Afterwards, I had lunch at a yummy soba restaurant and got a hair cut.

1/14 I joined a gym’s event atin the morning. 1/14 I joined a gym’s event in the morning.

Please note "in the morning".

1/14 I joined gym’san event at the gym in the morning. 1/14 I joined an event at the gym in the morning.

I could enjoy Da DJ’s live show in the evening. I could enjoy a DJ’s live show in the evening.