Dec. 19, 2020
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Yuhang sub-district office in fact is the former site of Yuhang County. According to historical records, Yuhang has a history earlier than Hangzhou's, that is to say, Yuhang first, than Hangzhou. Yuhang leaves me a nice impression: the city is small, there are not many tall buildings, no hustle cars, and not many people on the streets. But the whole town is tidy and clean, the air is fresh. Although it's a small town, there are Starbucks and McDonald's in the urban area. You know, even in prefecture cities, they don't have Starbucks. Why does Starbucks choose a small town to run a business? It is because Yuhang sub-district belongs to Yuhang district and this district has the top GDP in Hangzhou City, so its economy is very developed. I don't like big cities because I feel sort of depressed when I am in them. I like small and quiet towns. They can give me relaxed and peaceful feelings. In short, Yuhang town is a nice place with developed economies, beautiful scenery and nice weather. My niece can work here is her luckiness.
19/12/20
The Yuhang sub-district office in facts the former site of Yuhang County. (Did you know that the Yuhang sub-distrct office is the former site of Yuhang County.?
You can only use "in fact" if you're saying something that is contrary to what the reader thinks. For example: "Many people think that Americans only eat hamburgers, but in fact, we have a wide variety of cuisines."
According to historical records, Yuhang has a history earlier than Hangzhou's, that is older/has a longer his to say, Yuhang first,ry than Hangzhou.
Yuhang leaves me a nice impressionhas a nice atmosphere: the city is small, there are not many tall buildings, no hustle carstoo much traffic, and not many people on the streets.
"Hustle" can only be used in very specific expressions.
But the whole town is tidy and clean, and the air is fresh.
Although it's a small town, there are Starbucks and McDonald's in the urbadowntown area.
You know, even in prefectureal cities, they don't have Starbucks.
Why does Starbucks choose a small town to ruopen a businessstore?
It is because Yuhang sub-district belongs to Yuhang district and this district has the top GDP in Hangzhou City, so its economy is very developed.
I don't like big cities because I feel sort of depressed when I am in them.
I like small and quiet towns.
They can give mefeel relaxed and at peaceful feelings.
In short, Yuhang town is a nice place with a developed economiesy, beautiful scenery and nice weather.
My niece can work here is her luckinessis lucky that she can work here.
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I really like small towns too.
Dec. 19, 2020
In short, Yuhang town is a nice place with a developed economiesy, beautiful scenery and nice weather.
Could you please tell me why you change it to singular?
Dec. 19, 2020
The Yuhang sub-district office in facts the former site of Yuhang County. (Did you know that the Yuhang sub-distrct office is the former site of Yuhang County.?
The yuhang sub-district office is the former site of yuhang county. The yuhang sub-district office is the former site yuhang county.
Dec. 19, 2020
They can give mefeel relaxed and at peaceful feelings.
Could you please explain this change further? I can’t get it well.
Dec. 19, 2020
Thank you very much.
Dec. 20, 2020
Could you please tell me why you change it to singular?
Usually we use the singular for economy. A town is one thing (or one group) so it has one economy. China has a powerful economy (singular), even though it is composed of many cities. The European Union has a developed economy, even though it is many different countries. The one exception is when you talk about economies as a group, like l, “many developing economies are suffering issues because of the recession”
Dec. 20, 2020
Could you please explain this change further? I can’t get it well.
“Give me feelings” just isn’t used.
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Yuhang sub-district office in fact is the former site of Yuhang County. The Yuhang sub-district office i You can only use "in fact" if you're saying something that is contrary to what the reader thinks. For example: "Many people think that Americans only eat hamburgers, but in fact, we have a wide variety of cuisines." |
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According to historical records, Yuhang has a history earlier than Hangzhou's, that is to say, Yuhang first, than Hangzhou. According to historical records, Yuhang |
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Yuhang leaves me a nice impression: the city is small, there are not many tall buildings, no hustle cars, and not many people on the streets. Yuhang "Hustle" can only be used in very specific expressions. |
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But the whole town is tidy and clean, the air is fresh. But the whole town is tidy and clean, and the air is fresh. |
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Although it's a small town, there are Starbucks and McDonald's in the urban area. Although it's a small town, there are Starbucks and McDonald's in the |
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You know, even in prefecture cities, they don't have Starbucks. You know, even in prefectur |
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Why does Starbucks choose a small town to run a business? Why does Starbucks choose a small town to |
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It is because Yuhang sub-district belongs to Yuhang district and this district has the top GDP in Hangzhou City, so its economy is very developed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't like big cities because I feel sort of depressed when I am in them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like small and quiet towns. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They can give me relaxed and peaceful feelings. They |
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In short, Yuhang town is a nice place with developed economies, beautiful scenery and nice weather. In short, Yuhang town is a nice place with a developed econom |
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My niece can work here is her luckiness. My niece |
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