BI want to be good at English I want to be good at English

I think a more complete title works better here.

Actually, I have worked in Hheavy industries in Korea. I have worked in heavy industries in Korea.

Is your job "Heavy Equipment Operator" or "Heavy Duty Mechanic" maybe? It would sound more natural to say "I'm a (job) in Korea." or "I work as a (job) in Korea." And we start sentences with 'actually' when we're presenting an opposite opinion/fact or something surprising to a conversation partner. So it feels out of place here.

Actually, I have worked in Heavyseveral industries in Korea. I have worked in several industries in Korea.

Starting a piece of writing with "actually" is possible but I would advise against it until you get a better feel for it's nuance. I'm not sure if this is what you meant here.

Even ifthough I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at English. Even though I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at English.

'Even if X' = X is just a possibility 'Even though X' = X is real fact or situation And you could change this: be good -> 'get better' (~향상시키고 싶어)

Even ifthough I’m bad at English, I would like to be good at Englishimprove. Even though I’m bad at English, I would like to improve.

Improve = get better at something

Despite having less time I have, I have tried to have studied everyday by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama series "Suits" and currently getting 1 byon 1 claslessons every Sunday. Despite having less time, I have tried to have studied everyday by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama series "Suits" and getting 1 on 1 lessons every Sunday.

"lesson" is slightly more appropriate than "class" because class typically involves a group of students.

Despite the littless time I have, I have tried to have studiedy every day by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama "Suits", and I'm currently getting 1 by 1 classbeing tutored every Sunday. Despite the little time I have, I have tried to study every day by watching and listening to the Netflix American drama "Suits", and I'm currently being tutored every Sunday.

"the little time" = 내가 가진 작은 시간 "every day" = 매일, "everyday" = "일상적인" "being tutored" = 1:1 수업; 과외를 받기

Despite the littless time I have, I have tried to have studiedy everyday by watching and listeningthe Netflix American drama, Suits and. I'm also currently getting 1 by 1taking one-on-one classes every Sunday. Despite the little time I have, I have tried to study everyday by watching the Netflix American drama, Suits. I'm also currently taking one-on-one classes every Sunday.

- "Watching" already implies listening here, so no need to explicitly state both. - Breaking it into two sentences makes it easier to read (and also easier to write).

However it keeps 1 year, I think I faced the limit of improvingmy level of English has stayed the same after one way, I think I hit a limit when it comes to my English speaking skills. However my level of English has stayed the same after one way, I think I hit a limit when it comes to my English speaking skills.

I'm not quite sure what you meant in the first part of the sentence.

However it keeps 1after a year, I think I f've reached thea limit ofin improving my English speaking. However after a year, I think I've reached a limit in improving my English speaking.

after a year = sounds more natural 'reach a/the/my limit in ~' is a more natural expression

However it keeps 1's already been a year, I think I facedhit the limit of improving my English speaking skills. However it's already been a year, I think I hit the limit of improving my English speaking skills.

Just rearranged slightly for more natural phrasing.

I’m stressed nowathese days due to my bad English. I’m stressed these days due to my bad English.

"these days" sounds slightly more appropriate to me as a native speaker, though I cannot explain why. Maybe someone else can chime in.

I’m stressed nowadays due to my bad English. I’m stressed nowadays due to my bad English.

I’m stressed nowadays due to badeing bad at English. I’m stressed nowadays due to being bad at English.

So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently.? So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently?

So how can I improve my English skill more efficiently.? So how can I improve my English skill more efficiently?

So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently.? So how can I improve my English skills more efficiently?

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