July 11, 2025
Another advantage of summer days
As I've mentioned before, many types of fruits ripen in China during the summer. That's a big advantage for people like me who love fruit.
Last Sunday, I found another advantage of summer days.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait to exercise outdoors till the sun was going down.
When I was cycling along the Huangpu River, I noticed the sky looked like a magnificent oil painting because of the light of the sunset. And it was changing with time.
I captured some of the view. You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40
But I have to say, it's not the most beautiful part, because at that time, I had only gotten my iPhone in hand and had to hold my bike while taking the video.
If you want to see this type of sunset in Shanghai in person, you need to come here in the summer. In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of image quality.
之前说过，在中国，夏季是许多水果成熟的季节。对于像我这样喜欢水果的人来说，这是一个极大的好处。
上周日，我发现了夏日的一个好处。
那天天气很热，所以我不得不等到太阳开始西沉之后才去户外锻炼。
沿着黄浦江骑行时，我注意到天空因为夕阳呈现出一幅壮丽的油画般的景象。而且它还在随着时间的推移而不断变化。
我拍摄了一些画面。你可以在以下链接看到视频：https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40
但我不得不说，那并不是最美好的部分，因为当时我只带着手机，还得一边扶着自行车一边拍摄视频。
如果你想亲自在上海看到这种日落，那你得在夏季来这里才行。在其他季节，从那个地点看到的日落依然很美，但画质却不是这样的。
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Another advantage of summer days Another advantage of summer days
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Another Nice Aspect of Summer (or Summertime)
Another Nice Thing About Summer
“Advantage” is correct but feels a bit unnatural to me in this context, maybe because “advantage” sounds a bit like a competition between seasons, or between choices. If you said “another advantage of staying in Shanghai in summertime,” then “advantage” would sound perfectly natural, because you’re comparing one choice to another.
“Days” isn’t really necessary.
As I've mentioned before, many types of fruits ripen in China during the summer.
As I've mentioned before, many types of fruit ripen in China during the summer.
or: …many fruits ripen…
(The plural form of the uncountable noun “fruit” means “types/kinds of fruit,” so if you use “fruits” you don’t need “types of.”
That's a big advantagettraction for people like me who love fruit.
That's a big attraction for people like me who love fruit.
Last Sunday, I found another advantagenice thing about of summer daystime.
Last Sunday, I found another nice thing about of summertime.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait to exercise outdoors till the sun was going down to exercise outdoors.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait till the sun was going down to exercise outdoors.
This sequence is more natural because it reflects the actual sequence of events: first you waited, then the sun started setting, then you exercised outdoors.
When I was cycling along the Huangpu River, I noticed the sky looked like a magnificent oil painting because of the light of the sunset.
And it was changing with timemoment-by-moment | changing before my eyes.
And it was changing moment-by-moment | changing before my eyes.
I captured some of the view.
You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40
But I have to say, it's notI didn’t capture the most beautiful part, because at that timemoment, I had only gotten my iPhone in hand and had to hold my bike while taking the video.
You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40
But I have to say, I didn’t capture the most beautiful part, because at that moment, I had only gotten my iPhone in hand and had to hold my bike while taking the video.
Does my correction reflect what you mean? Your Chinese version doesn’t seem (to me) to say exactly what you said in English, so I decided to use some “creative license” in my correction 🙂
If you want to see this type of sunset in Shanghai in person, you need to come here in the summer.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of image quality.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of quality.
I agree with the other corrector, “image quality” describes a photograph or video, not about the real world.
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My corrections are just nitpicking; the only actual error is “image quality.” Excellent job, as usual!
Thanks for sharing the video. I really enjoyed it. I do love sunsets. :-)
I posted a few videos from my hikes last weekend onto my YouTube channel. You’re welcome to watch them if you like: https://youtube.com/@joetofu?si=264Jvq8k3D2dUajL
July 28, 2025
Thanks again!
Your corrections reflected what I meant exactly!
Have a nice day!
July 29, 2025
Nice videos!
The salmonberries in your video are significantly bigger than the berries I found in the mountains of Eastern China.
Generally, the size we found is similar to the one shown at the end of your video.
July 29, 2025
Thanks for checking out my video! Yeah, some of the berries in that patch were double the size of the berries I typically find in the woods. I wish I had bought a container along so I could pick some to bring home.
As I've mentioned before, many types of fruits ripen in China during the summer.
That's a big advantage for people like me who love fruit.
Last Sunday, I found another advantage of summer days.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait to exercise outdoors untill the sun was going down to exercise outdoors.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait until the sun was going down to exercise outdoors.
When I was cycling along the Huangpu River, I noticed the sky looked like a magnificent oil painting because of the light of the sunset.
And it was changing with time.
I captured some of the view.
You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40 But I have to say, it's not the most beautiful part, because at that time, I had only gotten my iPhone in hand and had to hold my bike while taking the video.
If you want to see this type of sunset in Shanghai in person, you need to come here in the summer.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of image quality.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of quality.
'Image quality' is used to talk about the quality of a photograph, but you were talking about seeing the sunset in person at this part of the entry.
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Your English sounds great! There are barely any errors.
July 12, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
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You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40 But I have to say, it's not the most beautiful part, because at that time, I had only gotten my iPhone in hand and had to hold my bike while taking the video. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
You can watch the video here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/p0b32vP_W40 Does my correction reflect what you mean? Your Chinese version doesn’t seem (to me) to say exactly what you said in English, so I decided to use some “creative license” in my correction 🙂 |
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When I was cycling along the Huangpu River, I noticed the sky looked like a magnificent oil painting because of the light of the sunset. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another advantage of summer days Another advantage of summer days Another advantage of summer days or: Another Nice Aspect of Summer (or Summertime) Another Nice Thing About Summer “Advantage” is correct but feels a bit unnatural to me in this context, maybe because “advantage” sounds a bit like a competition between seasons, or between choices. If you said “another advantage of staying in Shanghai in summertime,” then “advantage” would sound perfectly natural, because you’re comparing one choice to another. “Days” isn’t really necessary. |
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As I've mentioned before, many types of fruits ripen in China during the summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
As I've mentioned before, many types of fruit or: …many fruits ripen… (The plural form of the uncountable noun “fruit” means “types/kinds of fruit,” so if you use “fruits” you don’t need “types of.” |
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If you want to see this type of sunset in Shanghai in person, you need to come here in the summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of image quality.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of I agree with the other corrector, “image quality” describes a photograph or video, not about the real world.
In other seasons, the sunsets from that point are still beautiful, but not with this kind of 'Image quality' is used to talk about the quality of a photograph, but you were talking about seeing the sunset in person at this part of the entry. |
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That's a big advantage for people like me who love fruit. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
That's a big a |
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Last Sunday, I found another advantage of summer days. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Last Sunday, I found another |
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It was hot that day, so I had to wait to exercise outdoors till the sun was going down.
It was hot that day, so I had to wait
It was hot that day, so I had to wait This sequence is more natural because it reflects the actual sequence of events: first you waited, then the sun started setting, then you exercised outdoors. |
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And it was changing with time. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
And it was changing |
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