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Toluwani

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我妈

前几年,我妈生病了。那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们吃一道菜。最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈减肥了。因为我们住在一起,我没注意她减肥。好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意。因为在我的眼里,她没有减肥。拍照片真好啊。


A few years ago, my mom got sick. It was a serious illness because she couldn’t eat the same food as we did. Recently, while looking through some photos we took, I noticed that my mom had lost weight. Since we live together, I hadn’t realised she had lost weight. Many people said she had, but I didn’t notice because in my eyes, she hadn’t changed. Taking photos is good.

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我妈

前几年,我妈生病了。

拍照片真好啊。

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Toluwani

Nov. 28, 2025

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前几年,我妈生病了。

好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意。

因为在我的眼里,她没有减肥。

拍照片真好啊。

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Toluwani

Nov. 28, 2025

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Nov. 28, 2025

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我妈

前几年,我妈生病了。

最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈减肥了。

因为我们住在一起,我没注意她减肥。

好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意。

因为在我的眼里,她没有减肥。

拍照片真好啊。

我妈


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我妈

感觉不太正式,不过作为小短文的标题也可以啦。

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前几年,我妈生病了。


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那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们吃一道菜。


那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们吃一道菜一起吃饭 那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们一起吃饭

那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们吃一道菜。 那个病好重,因为她不能跟我们吃一道菜。

那个病好重,因此她不能跟我们一起吃饭。

那个病好重,因为所以她不能跟我们吃一道菜。 那个病好重,所以她不能跟我们吃一道菜。

不太理解这句话的意思,你是想说“通过她不能和我们吃一道菜,我们感受到她病的如此严重”。还是“她病得好重,所以不能和我们一起吃饭”。不能吃一道菜的原因是什么,有传染性还是她的身体无法消化你们的食物?

那个病好重,因为导致了她不能跟我们吃一样的菜。 那个病好重,因为导致了她不能跟我们吃一样的菜。

A few years ago, my mom got sick. It was a serious illness because she couldn’t eat the same food as we did. Recently, while looking through some photos we took, I noticed that my mom had lost weight. Since we live together, I hadn’t realised she had lost weight. Many people said she had, but I didn’t notice because in my eyes, she hadn’t changed. Taking photos is good.

最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈减肥了。


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最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈瘦了,看来她减肥了。 最近我在看我们拍过的照片,发现我妈瘦了,看来她减肥了。

最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈减肥了。 最近我在看我们拍过的照片,里面发现我妈减肥了。

因为我们住在一起,我没注意她减肥。


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因为我们住在一起,所以我没注意她减肥到她变瘦 因为我们住在一起,所以我没注意到她变瘦

因为我们总是住在一起,我没注意她减肥到她的变化 因为我们总是住在一起,我没注意到她的变化

好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意。


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好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意 好多人都说她减肥,但我没注意

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好多人都说她减肥瘦了,但我没注意。 好多人都说她瘦了,但我没注意。

因为在我的眼里,她没有减肥。


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因为在我的眼里,她没有减肥 因为在我的眼里,她没有

拍照片真好啊。


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