Nov. 6, 2024
(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1)
I believe that people should stop using goods that are made from animals. This opinion is based on the following reasons: the animal rights and the endangered species.
First, the animal rights should be protected. For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often genocide animals, which is not allowed by the moral.
Second, If we stop the manufacture goods that are made from animals, we can protect the endangered animals. Some of the goods are made from endangered animals which we should protect. We also can create the regulations for protecting the animals internationally.
In conclusion, I think that stop using goods that are made from animals is essential, as this can not only protect the animal rights but also guard the endangered species.
Should people stop using goods that are made from animals?
(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1) I believe that people should stop using goods that are made from animals.
This opinion is based on the following reasons: the animal rights and the endangered species.
This opinion is based on the following reasons: animal rights and endangered species.
First, the animal rightsrights of animal should be protected.
First, the rights of animal should be protected.
For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often gsenocideselessly destroy animals, which is not morallowed by ethe morical.
For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often senselessly destroy animals, which is not morally ethical.
Secondly, Iif we stop the manufacture of goods that are made from animals, we can protect the endangered animals.
Secondly, if we stop the manufacture of goods that are made from animals, we can protect the endangered animals.
Some of the goods are made from endangered animals which we should protect.
We also can create the regulations forlaws to protecting the animals internationally.
We also can create laws to protect animals internationally.
In conclusion, I think that stop using goods that are made from animals is essential, as this canwill not only protect the animal rightsright of the animal but also guardprotect the endangered species.
In conclusion, I think that stop using goods that are made from animals is essential, as this will not only protect the right of the animal but also protect the endangered species.
Should people stop using goods that are made from animalanimal products?
Should people stop using animal products?
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(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1)
I believe that people should stop using goods that are made from animalanimal products.
(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1)
I believe that people should stop using animal products.
This opinion is based on the following reasons: the animal rights and the existence of endangered species.
This opinion is based on the following reasons: animal rights and the existence of endangered species.
First, thely, animal rights should be protected.
Firstly, animal rights should be protected.
For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often genocideanimal products often kill animals, which is not allowed by the moral.morally acceptable
For example, some companies which make animal products often kill animals, which is not morally acceptable
The word "genocide" isn't used when referring to animals. "morally acceptable" is a much more natural wording. Also, the word 'slaughter' could also be used in place of 'kill' here.
Secondly, If we stop the manufacture goods that are made from animalof animal products, we can protect the endangered animalspecies.
Secondly, If we stop the manufacture of animal products, we can protect endangered species.
'species' refers to a specific group of animals so it's more appropriate wording
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Some animal products are made from endangered species which we should protect.
We can also can create threate regulations for protecting the animals internationally.
We can also create regulations for protecting animals internationally.
In conclusion, I think that stop usping goods that are made from animalthe use of animal products is essential, as this can not only protect the animal rights but also guard theprotect endangered species.
In conclusion, I think that stopping the use of animal products is essential, as this can not only protect animal rights but also protect endangered species.
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Overall very clearly written and understandable, there are just a few awkward grammatical choices holding it back. Good luck with studying for your exam!!
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For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often genocide animals, which is not allowed by the moral.
For example, some companies which make The word "genocide" isn't used when referring to animals. "morally acceptable" is a much more natural wording. Also, the word 'slaughter' could also be used in place of 'kill' here.
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Second, If we stop the manufacture goods that are made from animals, we can protect the endangered animals.
Secondly, If we stop the manufacture 'species' refers to a specific group of animals so it's more appropriate wording
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Should people stop using goods that are made from animals?
Should people stop using The title could be made more straightforward by simply referring to them as animal products. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1) I believe that people should stop using goods that are made from animals.
(For training of writing exam of EIKEN Tests Grade Pre-1) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This opinion is based on the following reasons: the animal rights and the endangered species.
This opinion is based on the following reasons:
This opinion is based on the following reasons: |
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First, the animal rights should be protected.
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Some of the goods are made from endangered animals which we should protect.
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We also can create the regulations for protecting the animals internationally.
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In conclusion, I think that stop using goods that are made from animals is essential, as this can not only protect the animal rights but also guard the endangered species.
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Secondly, If we stop the manufacture goods that are made from animals, we can protect the endangered animals. |
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