I went to sSouth Korea this weekend. I went to South Korea this weekend.

I went to sSouth Korea this weekend. I went to South Korea this weekend.

So I would like to share some of my memories from there. So I would like to share some of my memories from there.

I have been to Seoul a few times before, so this was my third time for me to visiting South Korea. I have been to Seoul a few times before, so this was my third time visiting South Korea.

I have been to Seoul a few times before, soand this was third time for me to visit South Korea. I have been to Seoul a few times before, and this was third time for me to visit South Korea.

Use "so" to indicate causation. It doesn't follow from the first part of the sentence ("I have been to Seoul a few times before") that this was your third time visiting South Korea, so you should either use "and" or put it in a separate sentence.

Last time I went in Summer, so I totally forgot Seoul could get that muchso cold, and I was not prepared anything for the weather at all. Last time I went in Summer, so I totally forgot Seoul could get so cold, and I was not prepared for the weather at all.

Last time I went in Ssummer, so I totally forgot Seoul could get that much cold, and I was not prepared anything for the weather at all. Last time I went in summer, so I totally forgot Seoul could get that cold, and I was not prepared for the weather at all.

Usually you don't write "that much + ADJECTIVE," unless you're writing out a comparison like "that much colder." Technically, the object in "I was not prepared for the weather" is "myself," so it shouldn't be "prepared anything."

When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and made me so excited but as soon as we got off the trains, I was reglretted that I did not pack any stuff makes myself warmwarm accessories such as a beany and gloves but. I only warmhad a jacket. When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and made me so excited but as soon as we got off the train, I regretted that I did not pack any warm accessories such as a beany and gloves. I only had a jacket.

When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and. It made me so excited, but as soon as we got off trains, I was reglretted that I did not pack any stuff that makes myselfe warm such as a beanyie and gloves, but I had only a warm jacket. When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time this year. It made me so excited, but as soon as we got off trains, I regretted that I did not pack any stuff that makes me warm such as a beanie and gloves, but I had only a warm jacket.

When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and it made me so excited b! But as soon as we got off the trains, I was reglretted that I did not pack any stuff makes myselfthing warm such as a beanyie and gloves, but onlyI did have a warm jacket. When we landed in Seoul, I saw snow for the first time this year and it made me so excited! But as soon as we got off the train, I regretted that I did not pack anything warm such as a beanie and glov, but I did have a warm jacket.

When you use "this" you don't need another preposition (前置詞) This monday = OK On this monday = X Next & Last too. Next month = OK In next month = X Last weekend = OK On last weekend = X

When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and it made me so excited, but as soon as we got off the trains, I was reglretted that I did not pack any stuff makes myselfthing warm, such as a beanyie and gloves but only, except for a warm jacket. When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and it made me so excited, but as soon as we got off the train, I regretted that I did not pack anything warm, such as a beanie and gloves, except for a warm jacket.

The first thing we did was finding our hostel. The first thing we did was find our hostel.

The first thing we did was findinglook for our hostel. The first thing we did was look for our hostel.

Look for = search So it works better here.

The first thing we did was finding our hostel. The first thing we did was find our hostel.

It was kind of a mission since we did not have wifi and we only have ad written instructions to the place andwith a rough map. It was kind of a mission since we did not have wifi and we only had written instructions to the place with a rough map.

It was kinda missiondifficult since we did not have wifi, and we only have an instrudirections to the place and a rough map. It was kinda difficult since we did not have wifi, and we only have directions to the place and a rough map.

It was kinda of our mission since we did not have wifi and we only have an instrud directions to the place and a rough map. It was kind of our mission since we did not have wifi and we only had directions to the place and a rough map.

It was kinda mission of difficult since we did not have wifi and we only haved an instruction to the place and a rough map. It was kind of difficult since we did not have wifi and we only had an instruction to the place and a rough map.

We startended toup asking some locals ton how to get to the place and they awere all so friendly and helpful. We ended up asking some locals on how to get to the place and they were all so friendly and helpful.

We started to ask some locals to how to get the place and they awere all so friendly and helpful. We started to ask some locals to how to get the place and they were all so friendly and helpful.

We started to asked some locals to how to get to the place and they awere all so friendly and helpful. We asked some locals how to get to the place and they were all so friendly and helpful.

We started to ask some locals to how to get to the place and they awere all so friendly and helpful. We started to ask some locals to how to get to the place and they were all so friendly and helpful.