April 29, 2025
Yesterday I woke up 8am and them I prepared the breakfast to my pets, I used yogurt with this dog food. They were so excited with their breakfast, they love taste new flavors. After that I took a shower and washed my hair. I dressed an then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason I didn’t walk out with my dogs. Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.
Yesterday, I woke up 8am and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with this dog food.
Yesterday, I woke up 8am and then I prepared breakfast for my pets. I used yogurt with this dog food.
They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love to taste new flavors.
They were so excited for their breakfast. They love to taste new flavors.
After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.
I dressed and then I made my breakfast,- two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
I dressed and then I made my breakfast- two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
This morning was so cool and rainy, f. For that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
This morning was cool and rainy. For that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.
Yesterday, I walked with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.
My day yesterday
Yesterday I woke up 8am and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with thiseir dog food.
Yesterday I woke up 8am and then I prepared breakfast for my pets. I used yogurt with their dog food.
They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love tasteing new flavors.
They were so excited for their breakfast. They love tasting new flavors.
In formal writing, a comma shouldn't separate two clauses that can each stand alone, though people do this all the time when texting and when being casual.
After that I took a shower and washed my hair.
I got dressed and then I made my breakfast,: two eggs with an arepa and Milo with milk.
I got dressed and then I made my breakfast: two eggs with an arepa and Milo with milk.
This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
This morning was so cool and rainy, I didn’t walk my dogs.
"walk with my dogs" isn't wrong, but the usual expression is "walk my dogs" with "walk" used as a transitive verb. To "walk out" usually means to leave...often abruptly or angrily! "He was so annoyed by the screaming children that he walked out."
Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.when the weather was better, I walked my dogs until 3pm.
Yesterday, when the weather was better, I walked my dogs until 3pm.
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Nice work.
Yesterday I woke up 8am and them I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I usadded yogurt withto thise dog food.
Yesterday I woke up 8am and prepared breakfast for my pets. I added yogurt to the dog food.
They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love tastd the taste of the new flavors.
They were so excited for their breakfast. They loved the taste of the new flavors.
"loved" = past tense (since you are describing something that happened in the past)
After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.
I got dressed an then Id made my breakfast,. I had two eggs with arepa, and Milo with milk.
I got dressed and made my breakfast. I had two eggs with arepa, and Milo with milk.
This morning was so coolcold and rainy, f. For that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
This morning was cold and rainy. For that reason, I didn’t walk my dogs.
Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was betterwhen the weather was better, I took my dogs for a walk until 3pm.
Yesterday, when the weather was better, I took my dogs for a walk until 3pm.
It would be ideal if you also mentioned the time you started walking your dogs, so as to provide the reader with appropriate context. It sounds like you walked your dogs for a long time, but it is not completely clear whether that is actually the case, because you did not state what time you started walking your dogs (or for how long).
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Good work. Keep practising.
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Yesterday I woke up 8am AM and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with this dog food.
Yesterday I woke up 8 AM and then I prepared breakfast for my pets. I used yogurt with this dog food.
They were so excited with their breakfast, t. They love to taste new flavors.
They were so excited with their breakfast. They love to taste new flavors.
I dressed and then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. I dressed and then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
This morning was so cool and rainy, and for that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
This morning was so cool and rainy, and for that, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
Yesterday, I woke up 8am and themn, I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets, I used yogurt with thise dog food.
Yesterday, I woke up 8am and then, I prepared breakfast for my pets, I used yogurt with the dog food.
They were so excited with their breakfast, they love the taste of new flavors. They were so excited with their breakfast, they love the taste of new flavors.
After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.
I got dressed and then, I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. I got dressed and then, I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason, I didn’t walk out withnt to walk my dogs.
This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason, I didn’t want to walk my dogs.
Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs untilat 3pm, when the weather was better.
Yesterday, I walked my dogs at 3pm, when the weather was better.
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They were so excited with their breakfast, they love taste new flavors. They were so excited with their breakfast, they love the taste of new flavors. They were so excited with their breakfast, they love the taste of new flavors.
They were so excited with their breakfast
They were so excited "loved" = past tense (since you are describing something that happened in the past)
They were so excited In formal writing, a comma shouldn't separate two clauses that can each stand alone, though people do this all the time when texting and when being casual.
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Yesterday I woke up 8am and them I prepared the breakfast to my pets, I used yogurt with this dog food.
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Yesterday, I woke up 8am and the
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After that I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. After that, I took a shower and washed my hair. |
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I dressed an then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
I got dressed an I got dressed and then, I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. I got dressed and then, I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. I dressed and then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk. I dressed and then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.
I got dressed and then I made my breakfast
I dressed and then I made my breakfast |
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This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason I didn’t walk out with my dogs.
This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason, I didn’t wa
This morning was so cool and rainy, and for that
This morning was
This morning was so cool and rainy, "walk with my dogs" isn't wrong, but the usual expression is "walk my dogs" with "walk" used as a transitive verb. To "walk out" usually means to leave...often abruptly or angrily! "He was so annoyed by the screaming children that he walked out."
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Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.
Yesterday, I walked
Yesterday, It would be ideal if you also mentioned the time you started walking your dogs, so as to provide the reader with appropriate context. It sounds like you walked your dogs for a long time, but it is not completely clear whether that is actually the case, because you did not state what time you started walking your dogs (or for how long).
Yesterday,
Yesterday, I walked |
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