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Tammy

March 1, 2026

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Today

I had planned to visit an ancient building today, but it has been raining heavily since this morning. So I stay at home instead.

I finished two things that I had wanted to do for a long time.

I created an audio for my elderly ladies' yoga class. It is a guide for relaxation before sleep. For some people, it's more difficult to fall asleep as they get older. So, earlier, I promised several of my students that I would record such an audio for them.

I have already sent it to the class after finishing. The fun part is that I used an AI to read the text I wrote and then use my voice tone to overlay it -- the AI even imitated my southern accent. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8Bu4UYCzkA

If you are currently learning Chinese, you can also use it as your relaxation audio before sleep. My Mandarin is not perfectly standard, but it is clear enough.

The second thing is that I created a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year. But the narration has not yet been completed. Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Today

So I stayed at home instead.

I created an audio for my elderly ladies' yoga class.

It is a guide for relaxation before sleep.

For some people, it's more difficult to fall asleep as they get older.

So, earlier, I promised several of my students that I would record such anthis audio for them.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8Bu4UYCzkA

If you are currently learning Chinese, you can also use it as your relaxation audio before sleep.

The second thing is that I creatfilmed a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year.

But the narration has not yet been completed.

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Tammy

March 1, 2026

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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Toluwani

March 1, 2026

183

You are welcome :)

You too ❤️

I had planned to visit an ancient building today, but it has been raining heavily since this morning, so I stayed home instead.

So I {stayed | have stayed | am staying} at home instead.

We generally try to avoid beginning a sentence with “so”. It’s more natural to merge this with the previous sentence.

I finished two things that I had wanted to do for a long time.

I created an audio (recording) for my elderly ladies' yoga class.

“Audio recording” sounds more natural to me.

An alternative:
I recorded some audio for my…

It is a guide for relaxation before sleep.

For some people, it's more difficult to fall asleep as they get older.

Alternative: Some people have trouble falling asleep as they get older.

So, earlier / previously, I promised several of my students that I would {record such an audio | make an audio recording like that} for them.

“Such an X” sounds very formal.

I have already sent it to the class (after finishing it).

“After finishing it” could be omitted since it’s implied that you finished it before you sent it.

The fun part is that I used an AI to read the text I wrote and then used my voice tone to overlay it -- the AI even imitated my southern accent.

You can watch it (listen to it?) here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8Bu4UYCzkA

“Watch” seems strange for an audio recording.

If you are currently learning Chinese, you can also use it as (your) relaxation audio before sleep.

My Mandarin is not perfectly standard, but it is clear enough.

The second thing is that I created a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year.

But the narration has not yet been completed.

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.

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Tammy

March 1, 2026

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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JoeTofu

March 1, 2026

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I added an alternative suggestion for the 3rd sentence.

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I had planned to visit an ancient building today, but it has been raining heavily since this morning.


I had planned to visit an ancient building today, but it has been raining heavily since this morning, so I stayed home instead.

So I stay at home instead.


So I {stayed | have stayed | am staying} at home instead.

We generally try to avoid beginning a sentence with “so”. It’s more natural to merge this with the previous sentence.

So I stayed at home instead.

I finished two things that I had wanted to do for a long time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I created an audio for my elderly ladies' yoga class.


I created an audio (recording) for my elderly ladies' yoga class.

“Audio recording” sounds more natural to me. An alternative: I recorded some audio for my…

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is a guide for relaxation before sleep.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For some people, it's more difficult to fall asleep as they get older.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For some people, it's more difficult to fall asleep as they get older.

Alternative: Some people have trouble falling asleep as they get older.

So, earlier, I promised several of my students that I would record such an audio for them.


So, earlier, I promised several of my students that I would record such anthis audio for them.

So, earlier / previously, I promised several of my students that I would {record such an audio | make an audio recording like that} for them.

“Such an X” sounds very formal.

I have already sent it to the class after finishing.


I have already sent it to the class (after finishing it).

“After finishing it” could be omitted since it’s implied that you finished it before you sent it.

The fun part is that I used an AI to read the text I wrote and then use my voice tone to overlay it -- the AI even imitated my southern accent.


The fun part is that I used an AI to read the text I wrote and then used my voice tone to overlay it -- the AI even imitated my southern accent.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8Bu4UYCzkA


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can watch it (listen to it?) here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8Bu4UYCzkA

“Watch” seems strange for an audio recording.

If you are currently learning Chinese, you can also use it as your relaxation audio before sleep.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you are currently learning Chinese, you can also use it as (your) relaxation audio before sleep.

My Mandarin is not perfectly standard, but it is clear enough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The second thing is that I created a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year.


The second thing is that I creatfilmed a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year.

The second thing is that I created a video of the 4th and the last plant I bought for this Chinese New Year.

But the narration has not yet been completed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe I can show you tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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