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Some people think that making processed food more expensive willould be a solution toand could encourage people to consume less sugar.

Or, "...that making processed food more expensive will encourage people to..."
Or, "...would be a solution to the crisis by encouraging people to..."

To begin with, in some countries, the cost of eating healthy is so expensive that making the price of processinged food higher willould have a minimal effect on consumer's decisions.

Since you are talking about the suspected outcome of something, as opposed to stating a know fact, I think it might be better to say "would" here

Furthermore, people need to understand the importance of changing their foodeating habits to improve their health, otherwise prices won't have any relevant effect.

The government needs to increase efforts to create campaigns in favor of eapromoting nutritiveous food in schools and work places.

When people understand that eating better haves a lot of advantages, they will spend more money ion those products that helps them to have the life they want.

In conclusion, reducing the consumerption of food and drinks with high levels of sugar requires far more than increasing prices.

It also needrequires education and healthy food more accessible healthy food.

Manufactured food with its high levels of sugar are increasing the rate of people with obesity andwho are over weight.

To begin, with, in some countries, the cost of eating healthy food is so expensive that making the price of processing food higher will only have a minimal effect on consumer's decisions.

In Canada, for example, a hamburger and a soda costs less than half the price of buying healthy prepared food.

Furthermore, people need to understand the importance of changing their food habits to improve their health, otherwise prices won't have any relevandirect effect.

The government needs to increase efforts toand create campaigns in favor ofencouraging people to eating nutritiveous food in schools and work places.

When people understand that eating better haves a lot of advantages, they will spend more money buying those products thatwhich would helps them to have the life they want.

In conclusion, reducing the consumerption of food and drinks with high levels of sugar requires far more effort than increasing prices.

It also needs to be supplemented with education and making healthy food more accessible.

14/06 Unhealthy Food: An opinion essay :)

ALSO POSSIBLE: A Short Essay on Unhealthy Food.

AfterWhile attempting to solvinge the problem of producing enough food for theour planet, modern societiesany people around the world are struggling with eating nutritious food.

LOGIC: The problem of producing enough food for the entire world has not been solved yet because human populations are growing more rapidly than available food supplies. Also, not all people in "modern societies" are struggling with eating nutritious food. A few people already avoid junk food.

MSugar-laden manufactured food with its high levels of sugar are increasing the rate of people with obesity and over weight are increasing the obesity rates around the globe.

Some people think that making processed food(s) more expensive will be a solution to encourage people to consume less sugar.

MY GUESS: To begin, in somemany countries, the cost of eating healthy is somore expense that making the price of processing food higher will have a minimal effect on consumer's decisionive compared to a most junk food that has long shelf lives.

For that reason, I think that besides increasing the price of manufactured food and drink products with high levels of sugar, it is also necessary to reduce the price of healthy foothere has an economic incentive for people to buy healthy food. The price gap between junk food and healthy food needs to reduced.

Furthermore, people need to understand the importance of changing their food habits to improve their health, o. Otherwise prices won't have any relevant effect., consumer behaviors will not change.

The gGovernments around the world need to increase efforts to create campaigns in favor of eapromoting nutritive food in schools and work places.

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In conclusion, reducing the over-consumer ofption of junk food and drinks with high levels of sugar require far more trequires a change increasing consciousness: not just reduced prices.

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It also needsMore education andbout healthy food needs to be more accessible.