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12th January
It is my second day here today.
In fact, I had spent about a year in Europe as an exchange student.
But after coming back to Japan, I have fewer opportunities to use English, which is why I started using this website.
I feel it's still hard to write English properly even in the junior high school level.
(Also, without any constraints ( I mean, questions in textbooks), I have no idea what to write here.)
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ItToday is my second day here today.
Both are correct, but “Today is my second day here” avoids redundancy with “here today”
I feel it's still hard to write English properly, even inat the junior high school level.
Use “at” instead of “in” when referring to a level.
Adding a comma before “even” improves readability.
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12th January 12th
or "12th of January"
It is my second day here today.
In factNot long ago, I had spent about a year in Europe as an exchange student.
Starting a sentence with "In fact" implies it will add supporting information or clarification to the previous sentence. Because the previous sentence is unrelated to this one, it doesn't really make sense here.
If you had said something like:
"This isn't my first experience with communicating in English. In fact, I had spent about a year in..."
it would make sense.
I would add something about when the trip took place instead (not sure when it was, so I just put something random)
But after coming back to Japan, I have fewer opportunities to use English, which is why I started using this website.
I feel it's still hard to write English properly even inat the junior high school level.
(Also, without any constraints ( I mean, questions in textbooks), I have no idea what to write here.)
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Good!
12th January
It is my second day here today.
In fact, I had spent about a year in Europe as an exchange student.
But after coming back to Japan, I have fewer opportunities to use English, which is why I started using this website.
I feel it's still hard to write English properly even in the junior high school level.
(Also, without any constraints ( I mean, questions in textbooks), I have no idea what to write here.)
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Very natural
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12th January This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It is my second day here today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Both are correct, but “Today is my second day here” avoids redundancy with “here today” |
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In fact, I had spent about a year in Europe as an exchange student. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Starting a sentence with "In fact" implies it will add supporting information or clarification to the previous sentence. Because the previous sentence is unrelated to this one, it doesn't really make sense here. If you had said something like: "This isn't my first experience with communicating in English. In fact, I had spent about a year in..." it would make sense. I would add something about when the trip took place instead (not sure when it was, so I just put something random) |
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But after coming back to Japan, I have fewer opportunities to use English, which is why I started using this website. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel it's still hard to write English properly even in the junior high school level. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I feel it's still hard to write English properly even I feel it's still hard to write English properly, even Use “at” instead of “in” when referring to a level. Adding a comma before “even” improves readability. |
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(Also, without any constraints ( I mean, questions in textbooks), I have no idea what to write here.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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