Jan. 20, 2023
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1/19
It's a normal day today. I don't recall anything special today. This moment I really admire who keeps a diary. It's a little hard to keep a diary when nothing special happening. Perhaps I just lack the ability of finding something special. As Auguste Rodin said ''Beauty is everywhere. It is not that she is lacking to our eye, but our eyes which fail to perceive her.'' I kind of making my life become unchanging. Now I would try to do something different if that day is normal.
1/20
Today my younger twin sisters went home. They need to prepare for a competition, so even they have started their winter vacation last week, they still
had stayed at the school. Tonight is the night before New Year's Eve. I'm so excited about Chinese New Year because I not only hang out with my relatives that seldom see but also eat lots of delicious food! By the way, I just feel lazy
to turn on my laptop recently. Since I turn on the laptop just for keeping a diary, it's not worth for me. Nevertheless, I still keep a diary in my smart phone!
1/19 & 1/20
1/19
It's a normal day today.
I don't recall anything special today.
It's a correct sentence, just a little redundant since you already used "today" in the previous sentence.
This momentMoments like these, I really admire people who keeps a diary.
"In this moment" = In this specific moment alone.
"Moments like these" = Continuous.
It's a little hard to keep a diary when nothing special is happening.
Perhaps I just lack the ability tof finding something special.
As Auguste Rodin said, ''Beauty is everywhere.
It is not that she is lacking to our eye, but our eyes which fail to perceive her.''
I kind of makthingk my life is becomeing unchanging.
Not sure what you mean here, I'm guessing from context that this phrasing will best reflect your intended meaning.
Now, I wouldill try to do something different if thate day is normal.
1/20
Today my younger twin sisters wentcame home.
Your original sentence is correct. I'm guessing based on the next sentence however, that they aren't leaving, but they're returning.
They need to prepare for a competition, so even they haveough they started their winter vacation last week, they still
had stayed at the school.
Tonight is the night before New Year's Eve.
I'm so excited about Chinese New Year, because I not only get to hang out with my relatives that I seldom see, but also I get to eat lots of delicious food!
By the way, I just feel lazy
to turn onuse my laptop recently.
The original is fine, but a little odd. I would use "use" instead of "turn on"
Since I turn onuse the laptop just for keeping a diary, it's not worth it for me.
Nevertheless, I still keep a diary ion my smart phone!
Idk why, but natives always use "on" for apps, programs and other things on their phone.
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Happy New Year! Hope you eat lots of good food and get lots of quality time with your family. And great job on the diaries, proud of you for sticking with it even on the quiet days.☺
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1/19 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a normal day today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't recall anything special today. I don't recall anything special It's a correct sentence, just a little redundant since you already used "today" in the previous sentence. |
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This moment I really admire who keeps a diary.
"In this moment" = In this specific moment alone. "Moments like these" = Continuous. |
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It's a little hard to keep a diary when nothing special happening. It's a little hard to keep a diary when nothing special is happening. |
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Perhaps I just lack the ability of finding something special. Perhaps I just lack the ability to |
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As Auguste Rodin said ''Beauty is everywhere. As Auguste Rodin said, ''Beauty is everywhere. |
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It is not that she is lacking to our eye, but our eyes which fail to perceive her.'' This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I kind of making my life become unchanging. I kind of Not sure what you mean here, I'm guessing from context that this phrasing will best reflect your intended meaning. |
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Now I would try to do something different if that day is normal. Now, I w |
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1/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today my younger twin sisters went home. Today my younger twin sisters Your original sentence is correct. I'm guessing based on the next sentence however, that they aren't leaving, but they're returning. |
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They need to prepare for a competition, so even they have started their winter vacation last week, they still They need to prepare for a competition, so even th |
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had stayed at the school.
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Tonight is the night before New Year's Eve. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm so excited about Chinese New Year because I not only hang out with my relatives that seldom see but also eat lots of delicious food! I'm so excited about Chinese New Year, because I not only get to hang out with |
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By the way, I just feel lazy By the way, I |
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to turn on my laptop recently. to The original is fine, but a little odd. I would use "use" instead of "turn on" |
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Since I turn on the laptop just for keeping a diary, it's not worth for me. Since I |
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Nevertheless, I still keep a diary in my smart phone! Nevertheless, I still keep a diary Idk why, but natives always use "on" for apps, programs and other things on their phone. |
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