Jan. 21, 2024
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I refreshed by shopping after work.
1/16
I relaxed at the cafe after work.
1/17
I enjoyed to join muscle training class with nice talk after work.
1/18
I refreshed by hula class after work.
1/19
I could keen on housework at night.
1/20
I woke up early and arrived in Nagoya at morning.
I enjoyed to eat Matcha dishes and see the live show in there.
1/21
I woke up late and cooking at morning.
Afterwards,I went to cafe to read a magazine and shopping.
1/15
仕事帰りに買い物をしてリフレッシュしました。
1/16
仕事の後はカフェでゆっくりしました。
1/17
仕事帰りに楽しく話しながら筋トレ教室に参加させていただきました。
1/18
仕事の後はフラ教室でリフレッシュしました。
1/19
夜も家事に取り組むことができました。
1/20
早起きして午前中に名古屋に到着しました。
抹茶料理を食べたり、ライブショーを観たりして楽しかったです。
1/21
遅く起きて朝から料理をしました。
その後、カフェに行って雑誌を読んだり、買い物をしたりしました。
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I refreshed by shopping after work
After work, I went shopping to refresh myself.
1/16 I relaxed at the cafe after work.
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I enjoyed to join muscle training class with nice talkchatting with (other people) in my strength training class after work.
"muscle training" is understandable, but for some reason it's called "strength training" (I think)
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I refreshed bywent to a hula class after work.
We don't commonly use "refreshed" like this, so having it just once might be good
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(I could keen on housework at night.)?
Unsure what this means. Could you clarify?
1/20
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I woke up early and arrived in Nagoya atin the morning.
I enjoyed to eating Matcha dishes and seeing the live show ins there.
1/21
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I woke up late and cooking ed that morning.
Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read a magazines and shopping.
You can say "magazines" even if it's actually only one magazine
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Good work!
Jan. 23, 2024
Appreciate for everyone who made corrections
1/15
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I felt refreshed by shopping after work.
Or "I felt refreshed after..."
1/17
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I enjoyed to joining a muscle training class with a nice talkconversation after work.
"A nice talk" may refer more to a formal talk. I would use "conversation".
1/18
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I felt refreshed by a hula class after work.
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I couldwas keen on doing housework at night.
Note "keen on doing".
1/20
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I woke up early and arrived inat Nagoya atin the morning.
Note "in the morning".
I enjoyed to eating Matcha dishes and see theing a live show in there.
Note "I enjoyed" + a participle like "eating"
1/21
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I woke up late and cooking ated in the morning.
Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read a magazine and go shopping.
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I like how you write a little about each day. It's a good example for me.
I'm glad you had such pleasant moments!
Jan. 23, 2024
Appreciate for everyone who made corrections
1/January 15-21/, 2024
I would rewrite this just to make it easier to read
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I refresheunwound by shopping after work.
Using "unwind" is a pretty common way to describe de-stressing after work.
1/16 I relaxed at the cafe after work.
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I enjoyed to join muscle training class with nice talk after workmy strength-training class after work, which included some friendly chatting/discussion/conversation.
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I refreshed bunwound with my hula class after work.
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I couldwas keen on doing housework at night.
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I woke up early and arrived inwent to Nagoya atin the morning.
I enjoyed to eating Matcha dishes and seeing the live show in there.
1/21
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I woke up late and cooking ated in the morning.
Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read a magazine and did some shopping.
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Great job!
Jan. 23, 2024
Appreciate for everyone who made corrections
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1/16 I relaxed at the cafe after work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Afterwards,I went to cafe to read a magazine and shopping. Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read a magazine and did some shopping. Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read a magazine and go shopping. Afterwards, I went to a cafe to read You can say "magazines" even if it's actually only one magazine |
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1/15-21/2024
I would rewrite this just to make it easier to read |
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1/15 I refreshed by shopping after work. 1/15 Using "unwind" is a pretty common way to describe de-stressing after work. 1/15 Or "I felt refreshed after..." 1/15 |
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1/17 I enjoyed to join muscle training class with nice talk after work. 1/17 1/17 "A nice talk" may refer more to a formal talk. I would use "conversation". 1/17 "muscle training" is understandable, but for some reason it's called "strength training" (I think) |
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1/18 I refreshed by hula class after work. 1/18 1/18 1/18 We don't commonly use "refreshed" like this, so having it just once might be good |
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1/19 I could keen on housework at night. 1/19 1/19 Note "keen on doing". 1/19 Unsure what this means. Could you clarify? |
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1/20 I woke up early and arrived in Nagoya at morning. 1/20 1/20 Note "in the morning". 1/20 |
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I enjoyed to eat Matcha dishes and see the live show in there. I enjoyed I enjoyed Note "I enjoyed" + a participle like "eating" I enjoyed |
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1/21 I woke up late and cooking at morning. 1/21 1/21 1/21 |
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