Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

It's alright even if you even changedit an entire sentence!!

Opposing Russia's invasion but not imposing economic sanctions or noanything against it is the same as doing nothing and just like saying "rape is wrong" when a woman is being raped in front of your eyes.

そうですね。

If you look at the countries thatwho side with Russia, you will see that Russia should not be allowed to win.

ですね。

When I see a Japanese supermodel married to an unsuccessful Japanese comedian, I feel true love, noas if that's true love and not about money.

ですね。

Fireworks festivals are often held even when it rains, as long as there is no wind.

For example, using _One Piece_ as a teaching material, they are teaching students how to make friends and the words that must be said because they arin order to become friends.

また、

For example, using _One Piece_ as teaching material, they are teaching students how to make friends and the words that must be said in order to make friends.

It's even alright if you even change an entire sentence!!

This just feels more natural. I’m sorry I can’t explain why!

Your way is smore elegantother.

“Elegant” is a formal word. In a casual setting we would say something less precise, such as “smoother,” “better,” cooler.”

Opposing Russia's invasion but not imposing economic sanctions or noanything against ithem is the same as doing nothing and just, like saying "rape is wrong" when a woman is being raped in front of your eyes.

We rarely use “it” to refer to countries. It’s more common to say “them,” “their,” or “they.”

If you look at the countries that side with Russia, you will seeunderstand that Russia should not be allowed to win.

This is more natural.

When I see a Japanese supermodel married to an unsuccessful Japanese comedian, I feelbelieve it’s true love, not money.

We usually only “feel” things that happen directly to us or to our friends and family.

Fireworks festivals are often held even when it rains, as long as there i’s no wind.

We often use singular words even if the plural word is more accurate. And contractions (there is = there’s) are a good way to sound more casual.

For example, using One Piece as a teaching material, they are teaching how to make friends, and the words that must be said because they are friendsfriends say to each other.

It was confusing to have “they” refer to the teachers who are using manga, but then also have “they” refer to the students in the same sentence. This avoids that issue.