My weekend I started ion fFriday, after school. My weekend started on Friday, after school.

My weekend I started in friday,I started my weekend after school on Friday. I started my weekend after school on Friday.

My weekend I started iI started my weekend on friday, after school. I started my weekend on friday, after school.

For days of the week we would use the preposition 'on'

My weekend I started ion fFriday, after school. My weekend started on Friday after school.

Remember to use Capitals on DAYS,

My weekend I started ion fFriday, after school. My weekend started on Friday after school.

Days of the week start with a capital letter in English. Use "on" instead of "in" when preceding a day of the week. The placement of "I" after "my weekend" wouldn't be natural. Alternatively, you could say "I started my weekend after school on Friday".

I go towent home at sixteen o'clock. I went home at sixteen o'clock.

Use the past tense here. Depending on where you live, we will sometimes say 5 o'clock instead of 16 o'clock but usually just numbers are used.

I go tot home at sixteenfour o'clock. I got home at four o'clock.

I don't know how it is for the brits but we Americans don't generally use the 24 hour clock outside of the military. Some even call it "military time". To make it clearer, you can say I got home at four p.m.

I go towent home at sixteen o'clock. I went home at sixteen o'clock.

Past tense of go = went

I go to home at sixteen o'clock. I go to home at sixteen o'clock.

I go to home at sixteenfour o'clock. I go home at four o'clock.

The "to" is not necessary. In English it is more typical to say four o'clock rather than use the universal standard time.

After, I reading a book, beacocause this is my hobby. After, I read a book, because this is my hobby.

AfterThen I reading a book, beacocause this is my hobby. Then I read a book, because this is my hobby.

After I reading a book, beacocause this is my hobby. After I read a book, because this is my hobby.

Past tense of reading = read We need an article before the noun 'book'

After, I reading a book, beacocause this is my hobby. After, I read a book because this is my hobby.

Try not to make it awkward, you want to transition smoothly.

After Iwards I will reading book, beacocause this is my hobby. Afterwards I will read book because this is my hobby.

"Afterwards" or "Then" would be more likely. You need the future tense of "read" - it's irregular. I might write a completely different sentence saying "This is one of my hobbies".

I love romantic and fantasy books. I love romantic and fantasy books.

I love romantice and fantasy. I love romance and fantasy.

I love romantice and fantasy. I love romance and fantasy.

We use romance to describe the book genre

I lovMy favourite genres are romantice and fantasy. My favourite genres are romance and fantasy.

Different book categories are called genres.

I love romantice and fantasy. I love romance and fantasy.

"Romance" is the noun, "romantic" is the adjective.

I eate dinner and watched a tv series with my mom and dad. I ate dinner and watched a tv series with my mom and dad.

Use past tense if this is an action that already took place.

I eat dinner and watch tv series with my mom and dad. I eat dinner and watch tv with my mom and dad.

I eate dinner and watched a tv series with my mom and dad. I ate dinner and watched a tv series with my mom and dad.

Past tense of eat = ate Past tense of watch = watched

I eat dinner and watch tv seriesa TV show with my mom and dad. (or you could say "parents" I eat dinner and watch a TV show with my mom and dad. (or you could say "parents"

IThen, I will eat dinner and watch a tv series with my mom and dad. Then, I will eat dinner and watch a tv series with my mom and dad.

Again, you need the future tense of the verbs "eat" and "watch" here.

I On Saturday iI have little home taskchores. On Saturday I have chores.

IOn Saturday iI have little home taska few chores. On Saturday I have a few chores.

IOn Saturday i have little home task, I had some small household chores. On Saturday, I had some small household chores.

Past tense of have = had Changed the last part to make it feel more natural. We would describe home tasks as chores typically

IOn Saturday i, I have little home taska couple of chores. On Saturday, I have a couple of chores.

Hometasks = Chores

IOn Saturday iI have little home tasks. On Saturday I have little home tasks.

English uses "on", not "in", with days of the week. "I" needs to be capitalized.

I muss't clean the kitchen, family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom. I must clean the kitchen, family room, my bedroom and the bathroom.

I muss't clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom. I must clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom and the bathroom.

I muss'tneeded to clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom. I needed to clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom.

'Needed' would be more natural here

I muss'tneed to clean the kitchen, familyliving room, my bedroom, and the bathroom. I need to clean the kitchen, living room, my bedroom and the bathroom.

must = need - in this context

I muss't clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom. I must clean the kitchen, the family room, my bedroom, and the bathroom.

I would put articles (the) in front of each item here. "And" usually comes before the last item in a list of items.

After, I spend time with my siblings and grandma. After, I spend time with my siblings and grandma.

After that, I spend time with my siblings and grandma. After that, I spend time with my siblings and grandma.

After, I spendt time with my siblings and grandma. After, I spent time with my siblings and grandma.

Past tense of spend = spent

After IThen I will spend time with my siblings and my grandma. Then I will spend time with my siblings and my grandma.

Future tense of "spend" by adding "will". You need to repeat "my" in front of "grandma" because it doesn't refer to the same person as "siblings".

IOn Sunday I muss't much learnt study a lot, beacocause ion mMonday iI have test. On Sunday I must study a lot, because on Monday I have test.

IOn Sunday I muss't much learn, beacose in monday ihave a lot to learn, because I have a test on Monday. On Sunday I have a lot to learn, because I have a test on Monday.

IOn Sunday, I muss't much learn, beacose ineeded to study for a test on mMonday i have test. On Sunday, I needed to study for a test on Monday.

The verb 'study' would work better here Changing the end to a structure that feels more natural

In Sunday I muss't much learn, beacose in monday i have test. In Sunday I muss't much learn, beacose in monday i have test.

On Sunday, I need to study because on Monday I have a test.

IOn Sunday I muss't much learn, beacose in monday ihave to study a lot because I have a test on Monday. On Sunday I have to study a lot because I have a test on Monday.

Use "on" for days of the week. "Have to study a lot" is much more natural in this context than "learn much". Always capitalize "I".

See ya! See ya!

Very casual but totally fine.