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What makes you who you are?

**Online persona:**

Internet resources erase he boundaries between countries and people. Knowing that I can communicate with other people cross over the world engages me learn English and cultures, make me an open person that knows anything is possible.

**Experience:**

I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will say you the real truth, you must find one by yourself.

**Cultural heritage:**

Social institutes in Russia fetter, that is a reason why after a school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to open new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, cause I feel that It’s waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on study English or programming but I know I’m wrong.

**Family:**

I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.

**Physical appearance:**

Being neat helps me feel more confident.

**Work:**

The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits

**Hobbies/interests:**

I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write own project. I feel that I need more social activities. A lot of time being doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

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What makes you who you are?

**Family:** I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.

**Physical appearance:** Being neat helps me feel more confident.

I feel that I need more social activities.

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Polyraspad

Jan. 16, 2025

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**Family:** I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.


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**Physical appearance:** Being neat helps me feel more confident.


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What makes you who you are?


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**Online persona:** Internet resources erase he boundaries between countries and people.


**Online persona:** Internet resources erase the boundaries between countries and people. **Online persona:** Internet resources erase the boundaries between countries and people.

Knowing that I can communicate with other people cross over the world engages me learn English and cultures, make me an open person that knows anything is possible.


Knowing that I canBeing able to communicate with other people across over the world engages me in learning English and cultures, and makes me an opentimistic person thatwho knows anything is possible. Being able to communicate with other people across the world engages me in learning English and cultures and makes me an optimistic person who knows anything is possible.

**Experience:** I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will say you the real truth, you must find one by yourself.


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**Cultural heritage:** Social institutes in Russia fetter, that is a reason why after a school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to open new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, cause I feel that It’s waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on study English or programming but I know I’m wrong.


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**Work:** The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits **Hobbies/interests:** I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write own project.


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I feel that I need more social activities.


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A lot of time being doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.


A lot of time beingspent doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me. A lot of time spent doing stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

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