April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful. For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed. I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought.
In this world, we provide good service to those who pay us, but not to those who don't. In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who heal my eyes in return, and I can be more kind than usual to them. But money is the right of any person to have, but beauty is largely a factor that each person is born with. It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors, so to speak, luck.
At any rate, I think lookism is a dangerous ideology, but I can't imagine how it can be completely eliminated from my mind. If there is a way to eliminate this idea, please tell me that.
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Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.
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It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!!
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I thought this is lookism, andmight be prejudice so then I thought this ismight be a dangerous thought.
In this world, we provide good service to those who pay us, but not to those who don't.
In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who heal my eyes in return, andare pretty so I can be more kinder than usual to them.
But money is the right of any person to haveAnyone can earn money, but beauty is largely a factor that eacha person ishas to be born with.
It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors or, so to speak, luck.
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そうですね。
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I think everybody has a bit of prejudice built within them due to upbringing and/or societal messaging but the important thing is to recognize when we treat others unequally and to check ourselves when we do. とてもいい質問です。
そして、今回もよく出来ました！
April 27, 2023
とても勉強になります！！ありがとうございます！🙇♂️🙏
I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful.
A better fit would be "I think certain behaviors, are acceptable when done by beautiful women. But otherwise, not acceptable when not done by an unattractive woman"
For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed.
Again, You can Phrase this much better,
" For example, If a Beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy. However, If someone not beautiful brought something to my house everyday, I might feel annoyed"
I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought.
Another great word to replace "Lookism" in this context would be "Prejudice"
Example "I thought this was prejudice and I thought this is a dangerous thought"
April 23, 2023
Thank you so much!!🙏
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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. I'd like to speak English more naturally and not |
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🙇♂️ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!! It's alright even if you |
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I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful. I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful. A better fit would be "I think certain behaviors, are acceptable when done by beautiful women. But otherwise, not acceptable when not done by an unattractive woman"
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For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed. For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed. Again, You can Phrase this much better, " For example, If a Beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy. However, If someone not beautiful brought something to my house everyday, I might feel annoyed" For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if there were someone who |
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I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought. I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought. Another great word to replace "Lookism" in this context would be "Prejudice" Example "I thought this was prejudice and I thought this is a dangerous thought" I thought this |
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In this world, we provide good service to those who pay us, but not to those who don't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who heal my eyes in return, and I can be more kind than usual to them. In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who |
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But money is the right of any person to have, but beauty is largely a factor that each person is born with.
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It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors, so to speak, luck. It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors or, so to speak, luck. |
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At any rate, I think lookism is a dangerous ideology, but I can't imagine how it can be completely eliminated from my mind. At any rate, I think |
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If there is a way to eliminate this idea, please tell me that. If there is a way to eliminate this そうですね。 |
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