March 24, 2023
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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so that would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Are those prescription sunglasses?
No, they aren't.
Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut. My favorite is called Angel Cream. They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that out. I don't like to eat at stores.
I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company. It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan. But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought they lost out to the competition.
I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today. But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.
One thing I do understand is that you're kind.
The time has finally come, right? I've been ready for it, tho.
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so thait would be helpful toif you correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!
You could also say "it would be helpful for me if you" or "it would help if you"
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Are those prescription sunglasses?
No, they aren't.
Yesterday morning I had a donut from Mister Donut.
I don't think you're technically wrong, but this makes it a little clearer what you're saying, especially if your reader doesn't know what Mister Donut is (I didn't).
My favorite is called Angel Cream.
They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat thait because you couldn't take that out.
Couldn't take what out?
I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company.
But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thoughtfigure they lost out to the competition.
I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.
But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.
This could also end with "so I'm going to be sleepy today."
One thing I do understand is that you're kind.
The time has finally come, right?
I've been ready for it, though.
Depending on when you're saying this it might also be proper to say "But I am ready for it". "tho" technically isn't the correct spelling, but it's completely okay to use in informal contexts like a conversation with a friend. However, for formal writing stick to "Though"
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Very good! The only real changes I made were stylistic.
March 26, 2023
Thank you so much!!
I’ve leaned a lot!!🙇♂️
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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so thait would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Are those prescription sunglasses?
No, they aren't.
Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut.
My favorite is called Angel Cream.
They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that an't buy it as takeout.
I don't like to eat at stores.
I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company.
It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan.
But tThere seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought theyhowever, so I think that they might have lost out to the competition.
初めて聞きました。
I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.
But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during theall day.
また、
I went to bed at 2:00 this morning so I'm going to be sleepy all day.
One thing I do understand is that you're kind.
The time has finally come, right?
I've been ready for it, though.
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よく出来ました！
March 25, 2023
But tThere seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought theyhowever, so I think that they might have lost out to the competition.
では僕の勘違いですね笑笑 アメリカにはあまりドーナツの店はないですか？笑
March 26, 2023
アメリカにはドーナツの店がたくさんあることをよく知っていますが、Mister Donutはアメリカの会社のことを全然知らなかったんです。とても驚きました。日系企業だと思っています。笑
March 26, 2023
アメリカにはドーナツの店がたくさんあることをよく知っていますが、Mister Donutはアメリカの会社のことを全然知らなかったんです。とても驚きました。日系企業だと思っています。笑
ですよね！そのことも調べて初めて知りました笑笑
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so that would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Are those prescription sunglasses?
No, they aren't.
Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut.
My favorite is called Angel Cream.
They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that outan't have it to go.
I don't like to eat at stores.
I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it iwas originally an American company.
It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan.
But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thoughtink they lost out to theran out of business due to competition.
I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.
But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.
One thing I do understand is that you're kind.
The time has finally come, right?
I've been ready for it, though.
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Good job! You sounded really good!
March 25, 2023
Thank you so much!!!🙇♂️
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I've been ready for it, tho. I've been ready for it, though. I've been ready for it, though. I've been ready for it, though. Depending on when you're saying this it might also be proper to say "But I am ready for it". "tho" technically isn't the correct spelling, but it's completely okay to use in informal contexts like a conversation with a friend. However, for formal writing stick to "Though" |
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