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I want to talk about my laptop :)

Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax. About studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answer. Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises. When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I have studied online through my laptop. Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleep like me at that time. Besides, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ). I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.

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Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax.

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June 13, 2023

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I want to talk about my laptop :)

Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax.

In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.

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leonard

June 13, 2023

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I want to talk about my laptop :)

In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.

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June 13, 2023

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I want to talk about my laptop :)


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Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax.


Every day, I use my laptop every day to study and relax. I use my laptop every day to study and relax.

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About studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answer.


About studying, I'm trying to learnstudy by myself and thenonly use themy laptop to search for the answers (when I get stuck). I'm trying to study by myself and only use my laptop to search for the answers (when I get stuck).

AboutWhen studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answers. When studying, I try to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answers.

simple present as this is a habit.

AboutTo studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the/my laptop to search for the answer. To study, I try to learn by myself and then use the/my laptop to search for the answer.

Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises.


Sometimes, I want to prepare for mytomorrow's subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises with friends . Sometimes I want to prepare for tomorrow's subjects and discuss the group exercises with friends .

Sometimes, I want to'll prepare for my subjects tomorrow, and then discuss with friends to do thewhen we do group exercises. Sometimes, I'll prepare for my subjects tomorrow, and then discuss with friends when we do group exercises.

Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects for tomorrow and (then) discuss with friends to do the group exercises with my friends. Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects for tomorrow and (then) discuss the group exercises with my friends.

It's either you discuss the group exercises with your friends or you do the group exercises

When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I have studied online through my laptop.


When the Covid-19 pandemic coames, I have I studied online through my laptop. When the Covid-19 pandemic came I studied online through my laptop.

Simple past tense here. Completed action in past.

When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I havestarted, I studied online through my laptop. When the Covid-19 pandemic started, I studied online through my laptop.

When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I havestarted / During the Covid-19 pandemic, I studied online through my laptop. When the Covid-19 pandemic started / During the Covid-19 pandemic, I studied online through my laptop.

Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleep like me at that time.


Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning,; you willould feel tired and asleepy like meI did at that time. Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning; you would feel tired and sleepy like I did at that time.

Imagine that you just sit and lookLooking at the screen all morning, you will made me feel tired and asleep like me aty all thate time. Looking at the screen all morning made me feel tired and sleepy all the time.

Imagine that you are just sitting (there) and looking at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleepy like me at that time. Imagine that you are just sitting (there) and looking at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and sleepy like me at that time.

Besides, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ).


BesidesIn addition, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ). In addition, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ).

Besides, II also use my laptop for my other hobbyies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone too :) ). I also use my laptop for my other hobbies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games (by the way I like to play on my smartphone too :) ).

Besides that, I use my laptop for my hobbyies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I also like to play on my smartphone :) ). Besides that, I use my laptop for my hobbies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I also like to play on my smartphone :) ).

If you mean "in addition to that" or "furthermore," then you can say "besides that." "Besides" is usually used when you're adding an additional fact to a related statement. Ex: She doesn't like swimming. Besides, she doesn't have a swimsuit.

I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.


I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time willcould harm my eyes so I only use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time could harm my eyes so I only use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.

"could" as possibility.

I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I. So I try to use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes. So I try to use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.

I know that using devices like computers, TVs, and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes, so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. I know that using devices like computers, TVs, and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes, so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.

In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.


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In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it (in) the right way. In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it (in) the right way.

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