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April 18, 2025

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Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.

I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.
I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.
Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).
Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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EllieGao

April 20, 2025

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Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.

I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).

Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.

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April 18, 2025

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EllieGao

April 18, 2025

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Recently, I created ten grandkids in The Sims.


Recently, I created ten grandkidschildren in The Sims. Recently, I created ten grandchildren in The Sims.

“Grandkids” kind of sounds like something an older person would say.

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I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.


I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately. I’ve been playing The Sims a lot lately.

Okay, but how about: Recently I’ve been playing The Sims a lot.

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I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community.


I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as their god, creating their entire community. I’m totally hooked—I see myself as their god, creating their entire community.

Removing 'basically' makes you sound more confident and assertive in your writing, which might sound better if you are trying to emphasise your position, however, your sentence was still correct as is.

I’m totally hooked—I basically see myself as’m like their god, creating their entire community. I’m totally hooked—I’m like their god, creating their entire community.

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Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).


Recently, I gave birth tobrought ten grandkids into the Lu family in The Sims (yes, I made it happen). Recently, I brought ten grandkids into the Lu family in The Sims (yes, I made it happen).

Saying 'brought' instead of 'gave birth' clarifies the context a bit more, as well as specifying it was in The Sims, as as unlikely as it may be, someone may not understand and think you actually gave birth. However, your original sentence is still clear and understandable.

Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen). Recently, I gave birth to ten grandkids in the Lu family (yes, I made it happen).

Sticking with the ‘god voice,’ you could say something like: Recently, I granted the Lu family ten grandchildren.

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Honestly, I’m super proud of building such a strong, chaotic dynasty.


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