- Ragnar Stormbreaker I was traveling to Orvam. - Ragnar Stormbreaker I was traveling to Orvam.

It's a big city, not beautifull like capital city Pllegue, but good for contuning whitinuing my career. It's a big city, not beautiful like capital city Pllegue, but good for continuing my career.

Spelling mistakes

It's a city of army and heros. It's a city of army and heros

No full stop as you are continuing.

Aand I am a young person who woants to bye a legent.d and I am a young person who wants to be a legend

I'm not sure what you wrote near the end, but I'll hazard a guess you meant this.

But there was a problem... right in front of me... "Gebrin!" But there was a problem right in front of me... "Gebrin!"

"What do you mean that is 1.3., it's 1.3 metres?" "What do you mean, it's 1.3 metres?"

Not sure what you meant here

Ramndom story - qQueen of the sSwamps1 Random story - Queen of the Swamps

Just a few typos you made!

"I was thinking that is 22.2thought it was 22.2 metres!" "I thought it was 22.2 metres!"

Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment iwas 5.3.!" Gebrin took a big breath, "And here I was thinking that it was 25.2 metres, and the escarpment was 5.3!"

"Are you kidding me, e? Everyone knows that esceraarpment is 3.3 metres becoause it is a gGregourusrian number and how. It just so happends that we can't remember somthe bleaeding date." "It's becoause we are stupid knights." hHe smiled awkwardly. "Are you kidding me? Everyone knows that escarpment is 3.3 metres because it is a Gregorian number. It just so happens that we can't remember the bleeding date." "It's because we are stupid knights." He smiled awkwardly.

Quite confusing here, I wasn't sure about these corrections as I didn't know what you were writing about.

"and I now that wWe dwon't make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa.. W.we can do this cCap." "We won't make it to Orvam in 2 days, but if we go though the Morawa...we can do this Cap."

Cap as in captain?

I knew what that meanst...and I didn't like it, but he was right. I knew what that meant...and I didn't like it, but he was right.

"yYou know that you have the moust stupid ideas iright? I swear that one day someone will die becoause of it" He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and schouted, "lLads we changetd the way wroute! We will go through the swamps. now." "You know that you have the most stupid ideas right? I swear that one day someone will die because of it" He smiled at me like it was a compliment, then he turned around and shouted, "Lads we changed the route! We will go through the swamps now."

Then a heard the no sound of a newbie swallowing in horror could be heard. The sound of a newbie swallowing in horror could be heard.