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Have you ever had a similar experience? The new term is about to start, but you haven't finished all your homework yet.
Last night. I had this kind of experience.
When I bought my Nianxiaohua before the Chinese New Year, I decided to show you guys the flowers I bought.
Then last night, the night on the last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just found that I hadn't done it. So I grabbed my phone and edited a video about one of my Niaoxiaohua -- dahlia immediately. You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/bKOsSeoB0ZI
It's a little bit short, but I tried my best.
I bought four plants that day. I'll show you in a week -- At least I hope so.
My Dahlias
Have you ever had a similar experience?
The new term is about to start, but you haven't finished all your homework yet.
Last night, I had this kind of experience.
When I bought my Nianxiaohua before the Chinese New Year, I decided to show you guys the flowers I bought.
Then last night, {the last night on| the lastend} of the Chinese New Year holiday, I {just found | suddenly realized} that I hadn't done it.
So I immediately grabbed my phone and edicreated a video about one of my Niaoxiaohua -- a dahlia immediately.
It’s possible to keep “immediately” at the end of the sentence, but then you’d need to add another long dash: “…about one of my Nianxiaohua -- a dahlia -- immediately.”
I don’t think “edited” works well in this context, since you had to do much more than edit a single video clip: you recorded several clips, combined them, added voiceover, captions & subtitles, etc. “Created” works well instead.
You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/bKOsSeoB0ZI
It's a little bit short, but I tried my best.
I bought four plants that day.
I'll show you in a week -- at least I hope so.
“At” should not be capitalized.
Feedback
Your dahlias are beautiful!
My Dahlias
Have you ever had a similar experience?d this:
"Have you ever had a similar experience" is a phrase I would use after discussing the situation. So you start the conversation asking if the reader has experienced something I would format it as "Have you ever experienced this:".
The new term is about to start, but you haven't finished all your homework yet.?
Might be more of my own opinion, but I'd add a "?" here as you are generally asking a question!
Last night.
I had this kind of experience.
When I bought my Nianxiaohua before the Chinese New Year, I decided to show you guys the flowers I bought.
Then last night, the night on the last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just found that I hadn't done it.
Sentence is correct, but another way to phrase it could be "last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just realized that I hadn't done it."
So I grabbed my phone and edited a video about one of my Niaoxiaohua -- dahlia immediately.
You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/bKOsSeoB0ZI
It's a little bit short, but I tried my best.
I bought four plants that day.
I'll show you in a week --
At least I hope so.
Feedback
Good job! Made a few corrections. Looking forward to seeing the flowers!
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Have you ever had a similar experience? Have you ever "Have you ever had a similar experience" is a phrase I would use after discussing the situation. So you start the conversation asking if the reader has experienced something I would format it as "Have you ever experienced this:". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The new term is about to start, but you haven't finished all your homework yet. The new term is about to start, but you haven't finished all your homework yet Might be more of my own opinion, but I'd add a "?" here as you are generally asking a question! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I bought my Nianxiaohua before the Chinese New Year, I decided to show you guys the flowers I bought. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then last night, the night on the last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just found that I hadn't done it. Then last night, the night on the last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just found that I hadn't done it. Sentence is correct, but another way to phrase it could be "last of the Chinese New Year holiday, I just realized that I hadn't done it." Then last night, {the last night |
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So I grabbed my phone and edited a video about one of my Niaoxiaohua -- dahlia immediately. This sentence has been marked as perfect! So I immediately grabbed my phone and It’s possible to keep “immediately” at the end of the sentence, but then you’d need to add another long dash: “…about one of my Nianxiaohua -- a dahlia -- immediately.” I don’t think “edited” works well in this context, since you had to do much more than edit a single video clip: you recorded several clips, combined them, added voiceover, captions & subtitles, etc. “Created” works well instead. |
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It's a little bit short, but I tried my best. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought four plants that day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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