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My Little Garden Update

It's a little late, but I wanted to share an update on my balcony garden. You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/OoWNjpe7XPE

Here is a quick follow-up: a bird ate the first blueberry shown in the video! I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I kept it outside after filming. When I got home at night, that berry—along with the other ripe ones—was gone. I'm a little sad, but I guess this is nature.

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My Little Garden Update

It's a little late, but I wanted to share an update on my balcony garden.

You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/OoWNjpe7XPE

Here is a quick follow-up:

a bird ate the first blueberry shown in the video!

When I got home at night, that berry—along with the other ripe ones—was gone.

I'm a little sad, but I guess this is nature.

My Little Garden Update

It's a little late, but I wanted to share an update on my balcony garden.

You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/OoWNjpe7XPE

Here is a quick follow-up:

a bird ate the first blueberry shown in the video!

When I got home at night, that berry—along with the other ripe ones—was gone.

I'm a little sad, but I guess this is nature.

My Little Garden Update

It's a little late, but I wanted to share an update on my balcony garden.

You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/OoWNjpe7XPE

Here is a quick follow-up:

a bird ate the first blueberry shown in the video!

When I got home at night, that berry—along with the other ripe ones—was gone.

I'm a little sad, but I guess this is nature.

My Little Garden Update


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It's a little late, but I wanted to share an update on my balcony garden.


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You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/OoWNjpe7XPE


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a bird ate the first blueberry shown in the video!


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I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I kept it outside after filming.


I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I kept{left | moved} it outside after filming. I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I {left | moved} it outside after filming.

If it was already outside when you filmed it and you left it there, I would use “left”; if you moved it outside after you finished filming, I’d use “moved.”

I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I kepleft it outside after filming. I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I left it outside after filming.

I normally keep the blueberry plant inside the balcony, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I kepleft it outsiden the balcony after filming. I normally keep the blueberry plant inside, but I wanted it to get more sunshine, so I left it on the balcony after filming.

A balcony is by definition an outside platform, so we would describe something as being on the balcony, rather than inside the balcony. It sounds like you're describing usually keeping the plant inside, away from the balcony, but this time you left it outside on the balcony. Is my understanding correct?

When I got home at night, that berry—along with the other ripe ones—was gone.


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I'm a little sad, but I guess this is nature.


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