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Jan. 19, 2022

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Envy

It is sunny today. I've never seen sunshine for more than a week, so I decide to go riding a bike. In the afternoon, I go riding to a town with a teenager Zhu. We chats when we riding. I tell her that one of her classmate live nearby, because I bumped into her twice. In the first time, I couldn't recognize her because I didn't know her. In the second time, I also couldn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead. Zhu say, "oh, her forehead, which I envy so much." I am so surprised. Then she continue, "because my forehead is too big (or large)." I tell her that her forehead is quite pretty. She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse." I also think her hair is normal as well.
Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as a adolescent, when we are too sensitive about others' judgement. So I tell her that it would be ok whether your hair is thin or thick, because nobody is perfect. Furthermore, your hair quantity doesn't break the law or disturb anyone, so, take easy.

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Envy

It is sunny today.

Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as a adolescent, when we are too sensitive about others' judgement.

Furthermore, your hair quantity doesn't break the law or disturb anyone, so, take easy.

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kiwy

Jan. 22, 2022

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She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse."

Hmm, "top hair" isn't something I'd say, but I get what you mean.

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Jan. 22, 2022

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Envy

It is sunny today.

I am so surprised.

I tell her that her forehead is quite pretty.

I also think her hair is normal as well.

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Jan. 21, 2022

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Envy


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It is sunny today.


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I've never seen sunshine for more than a week, so I decide to go riding a bike.


I've never haven't seen sunshine forin more than a week, so I decide to go riding aride my bike. I haven't seen sunshine in more than a week, so I decide to ride my bike.

I've neverhaven't seen sunshine for more than a week, so I decided to go ridinge a bike. I've haven't seen sunshine for more than a week, so I decided to go ride a bike.

Or better, "I decided to go for a bike ride."

In the afternoon, I go riding to a town with a teenager Zhu.


In the afternoon, I go ridingride to a town with a teenager named Zhu. In the afternoon, I ride to a town with a teenager named Zhu.

In the afternoon, I go ridingrode to a town with a teenager named Zhu. In the afternoon, I rode to a town with a teenager named Zhu.

We chats when we riding.


We chats whilen we ridinge. We chat while we ride.

We chats when wted while we were riding. We chatted while we were riding.

I tell her that one of her classmate live nearby, because I bumped into her twice.


I tell her that one of her classmates lives nearby, because I bumped into her twice. I tell her that one of her classmates lives nearby, because I bumped into her twice.

I tellold her that one of her classmates lives nearby, because I've bumped into her twice. I told her that one of her classmates lives nearby, because I've bumped into her twice.

In the first time, I couldn't recognize her because I didn't know her.


In tThe first time, I couldidn't recognize her because I didn't know her. The first time, I didn't recognize her because I didn't know her.

In tThe first time, I couldn't recognize her because I didn't know her well. The first time, I couldn't recognize her because I didn't know her well.

In the second time, I also couldn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead.


In tThe second time, I also couldidn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead. The second time, I also didn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead.

In tThe second time, I also couldn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead. The second time, I also couldn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead.

Zhu say, "oh, her forehead, which I envy so much."


Zhu says, "oOh, her forehead, which I envy so much." Zhu says, "Oh, her forehead, which I envy so much."

Zhu sayid, "oh, her forehead, which I envy it so much." Zhu said, "oh, her forehead, I envy it so much."

I am so surprised.


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I amwas so surprised. I was so surprised.

Then she continue, "because my forehead is too big (or large)."


Then she continues, "because mMy forehead is too big (or large)." Then she continues, "My forehead is too big."

Then she continued, "because my forehead is too big (or large)." Then she continued, "because my forehead is too big."

Both are correct, but big sounds more natural to me.

I tell her that her forehead is quite pretty.


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I tellold her that her forehead is quite pretty. I told her that her forehead is quite pretty.

She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse."


She explains again, "mMy forehead is ok, but my top hair is a bit sparse on the top." She explains again, "My forehead is ok, but my hair is a bit sparse on the top."

She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse." She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse."

Hmm, "top hair" isn't something I'd say, but I get what you mean.

I also think her hair is normal as well.


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I also think her hair is normal as well. I think her hair is normal as well.

"also" or "as well," you don't need both.

Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as a adolescent, when we are too sensitive about others' judgement.


Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as a adolescents, when we are too sensitive abouto others' judgement. Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as adolescents, when we are too sensitive to others' judgement.

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So I tell her that it would be ok whether your hair is thin or thick, because nobody is perfect.


So I tell her that it would be ok, "You are fine whether your hair is thin or thick, because n. Nobody is perfect. So I tell her, "You are fine whether your hair is thin or thick. Nobody is perfect.

So I tellold her that it would be's ok whether your hair is thin or thick, because nobody is perfect. So I told her that it's ok whether your hair is thin or thick, because nobody is perfect.

Furthermore, your hair quantity doesn't break the law or disturb anyone, so, take easy.


FurthermoreAlso, your hair quantity doeisn't breaking the law or disturbing anyone, so, take easy. don't worry about it." Also, your hair isn't breaking the law or disturbing anyone, so don't worry about it."

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