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School Adventures
Fred and George created an enchanted quill, elegant and shiny but was enchanted to have random effects every time a person touched it. For Hermione, its effect was that her voice turned laud and dramatic. Luna by her part, when she touched it, her hair turned bright green with little sparkles floating around her head. Next, Neville at the moment touched it, immediately he froze. Hia shoes began to dance on their own. His feet started tapping, sliding and jumping as if they had a mind of their own. A few minutes later Draco was the next victim, pink bubbles started floating out of his ears. After, the Professor McGonagall touched it. Then her hat spinning like a helicopter, sightly rising from her head. Finally, Fred and George were taken into detention the next day.
Fred and George created an enchanted quill, elegant and shiny, but was enchanted to have random effects every time a person touched it.
For Hermione, its effect was that her voice turned laoud and dramatic.
Luna by her part, when sheWhen Luna touched it, her hair turned bright green with little sparkles floating around her head.
Next, Neville at the moment Neville touched it, he immediately he froze.
Hias shoes began to dance on their own.
His feet started tapping, sliding and jumping as if they had a mind of their own.
A few minutes later, Draco was the next victim, and pink bubbles started floating out of his ears.
After, theat, Professor McGonagall touched it.
Then her hatHer hat started spinning like a helicopter, sightly rising from her head.
Finally, Fred and George were taken into detention the next day.
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Fred and George created an enchanted quill, elegant and shiny but was enchanted to have random effects every time a person touched it. Fred and George created an enchanted quill, elegant and shiny, but |
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For Hermione, its effect was that her voice turned laud and dramatic. For Hermione, its effect was that her voice turned l |
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Luna by her part, when she touched it, her hair turned bright green with little sparkles floating around her head.
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Next, Neville at the moment touched it, immediately he froze. Next, |
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Hia shoes began to dance on their own. Hi |
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His feet started tapping, sliding and jumping as if they had a mind of their own. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few minutes later Draco was the next victim, pink bubbles started floating out of his ears. A few minutes later, Draco was the next victim, and pink bubbles started floating out of his ears. |
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After, the Professor McGonagall touched it. After |
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Then her hat spinning like a helicopter, sightly rising from her head.
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Finally, Fred and George were taken into detention the next day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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