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Well, my days go pretty well. Not speaking about my sickness, of course. I stay optimistic and strong every day, even when I have negative thoughts about my exam preparation or about my mental health… I wish I had a person to cry in his shoulder but we have what we have.
So, what am I doing here? Trying to learn some more vocabulary and meet new people, who have same interests with me! (learning English lmao). So, all comments are welcome.
mMy first post, sorry for being silly.
My first post, sorry for being silly.
It seems like you’re writing informally, so punctuation and capitalization probably aren’t that big of a deal, but I just thought I’d correct it anyway.
I wish I had a perssomeone to cry ion his shoulder, but we have what we haveit is what it is.
I wish I had someone to cry on his shoulder, but it is what it is.
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Good job! I also want to wish you lots of success on your English-learning journey. :)
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my first post, sorry for being silly
It seems like you’re writing informally, so punctuation and capitalization probably aren’t that big of a deal, but I just thought I’d correct it anyway. |
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Well, my days go pretty well. |
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Not speaking about my sickness, of course. |
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I stay optimistic and strong every day, even when I have negative thoughts about my exam preparation or about my mental health… |
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I wish I had a person to cry in his shoulder but we have what we have.
I wish I had |
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So, what am I doing here? |
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Trying to learn some more vocabulary and meet new people, who have same interests with me! |
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(learning English lmao). |
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So, all comments are welcome. |
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