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Hello everybody.
It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinks.
I going to explain it. I was planned all quite a routine for improve my English skills but some days after that my dad´s die, my friend who had surgery, he not have nobody who can look after him. So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but on friday I carry him to the hospital again and I passed all night with him because he was filled bad again.
Among all of that, I thougth about the weird circunstances that it motived me to do this, because I never had looked after a sick person and ended to I came to the conclution that the live is teaching to look after somebody close to me or myself.
finally, it has been an interesting experience, take charge this responsability and I was surprised myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent for those tasks.
Is for that reason, I just today cought come to visit the page, thanks everybody that correct my last text, I hope from this monday I will be able to star my study and work routine.
Bye bye.


Aprendiendo cosas nuevas.
hola a todos, es extraño ver como, a veces tus planes no se desarrollan de la forma en que lo piensas.
Me explico: Yo tenia planeada toda una rutina de estudio para mejorar mis habilidades de Ingles, pero pocos dias despues de la muerte de mi padre, un amigo mio se sometio a una cirugia delicada y al salir no tenia quien cuidara de El, asi que lo traje a mi casa y con mi esposa lo estuvimos cuidando durante la semana pasada hasta el viernes que tuve que llevarlo nuevamente al hospital y pase toda la noche cuidandolo porque volvio a sentirse mal. En medio de todo esto meditaba sobre las extrañas circunstancias que me motivaron a hacer esto pues yo nunca habia cuidado un enfermo y llegue a la conclusion que quiza la vida me esta preparando para cuidar de alguien muy cercano a mi o quiza yo mismo.
en fin, ha sido interesante hacerme cargo de esta responsabilidad y me sorprendi a mi mismo al encontrar lo paciente y comprometido que puedo ser para estas tareas.
Por esta razon, apenas hoy pude volver a visitar la pagina, gracias a todos los que me corrigieron mi texto anterior y espero que a partir del lunes pueda normalizar mi rutina de estudio y trabajo.
Chao.

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Hello everybody.

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Hello everybody.

I going to explain it.

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I'm so sorry for your loss. RIP your dad. Hope your friend can have someone take care of him.

Bye bye.


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So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but on friday I carry him to the hospital again and I passed all night with him because he was filled bad again.


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