Feb. 27, 2022
Paris under water it is a danger the eiffeltower destroy . The primary schools broken . The government says that all the city leave . The majority has go the city but the rest of the people would you like go. But what could you do it was a derrible famine. The most has be terrified scare . But on the end we they make the proper and we all could leave.
the capital pParis fluentis flooded
the capital Paris is flooded
Paris is under water it, there is a danger that the eEiffel tower will be destroyed .
Paris is under water, there is a danger that the Eiffel tower will be destroyed .
The primary schools broken are damaged.
The primary schools are damaged.
Broken is more suitable for tools, etc.
The government says that all the city should leave . The government says that all the city should leave .
Or "all people should leave"
The majority has goleft the city but the rest of the people would you like gostay.
The majority has left the city but the rest of the people would stay.
Not sure I understood your meaning here.
But what could you do it was a dterrible faminedisaster.
But what could you do it was a terrible disaster.
The most has bMost people were terrified scare .
Most people were terrified.
But onat the end we they makde the proper call and we all could leave.
But at the end they made the proper call and we all could leave.
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Not bad but too many pronouns.
the capital paris fluent the capital paris fluent
not sure what "fluent" means. flooded?
Paris is under water i. It is ain danger t. The eEiffelt Tower is destroy ed.
Paris is underwater. It is in danger. The Eiffel Tower is destroyed.
The primary schools are broken .
The primary schools are broken.
The government says that all the city must leave .
The government says that all the city must leave.
The majority hasof people have to go the city but the rest of the people would you like goto stay.
The majority of people have to go the city but the rest of the people would like to stay.
not sure what it intended here
But what could you do i? It was a dterrible famine.
But what could you do? It was a terrible famine.
The most has bMost people are terrified scare .
Most people are terrified.
But oin the end we they makde the properit correct, and we all could all leave.
But in the end they made it correct, and we could all leave.
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But on the end we they make the proper and we all could leave.
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the capital paris fluent the capital paris fluent the capital paris fluent not sure what "fluent" means. flooded?
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Paris under water it is a danger the eiffeltower destroy .
Paris is under
Paris is under water |
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The primary schools broken .
The primary schools are broken
The primary schools Broken is more suitable for tools, etc. |
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The government says that all the city leave .
The government says that all the city must leave The government says that all the city should leave . The government says that all the city should leave . Or "all people should leave" |
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The majority has go the city but the rest of the people would you like go.
The majority not sure what it intended here
The majority has Not sure I understood your meaning here. |
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But what could you do it was a derrible famine.
But what could you do
But what could you do it was a |
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The most has be terrified scare .
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