June 21, 2025
When do you feel a sense of fulfillment?
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish the game which is magnificent RPG. I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur Expedition33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness. Can someone understand my feeling?
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I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment (and vainity) when I finish thea game which is a magnificent RPG.
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment (and vanity) when I finish a game which is a magnificent RPG.
"vain" is an adjective, so you'd need "vanity" which is the noun equivalent. However, I think it reads more naturally here to just omit it.
I've enjo played "Clair Obscur Expedition 33" recently and getfelt a sense of satisfaction and emptiness (afterwards).
I played "Clair Obscur Expedition 33" recently and felt a sense of satisfaction and emptiness (afterwards).
It's probably more natural to specify "afterwards" here, but it is grammatically valid without it.
Can someonanyone else understand my feeling?
Can anyone else understand my feeling?
June 23, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your explanations of each part are very helpful.
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish the game which isa magnificent RPG.
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish a magnificent RPG.
I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness. I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness.
June 23, 2025
Thank you for the correction.
When do you feel a sense of fulfillment?
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish the game which ised a magnificent RPG game.
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finished a magnificent RPG game.
I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur Expedition33" recently and gefelt satisfaction and emptiness.
I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur Expedition33" recently and felt satisfaction and emptiness.
Can someone understand my feeling?
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Very nicely written! Actually I started to play Expedition 33 myself just yesterday and already enjoying it so much! I know the feeling of emptiness after completing a game very well, its the same feeling that you would get after finishing a good book series or a TV show. You wish there was even more content, right?
June 23, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
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I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur Expedition33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness.
I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur Expedition33" recently and I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness. I've enjoyed "Clair Obscur: Expedition 33" recently and get satisfaction and emptiness.
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I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish the game which is magnificent RPG.
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment and vain when I finish
I am filled with an enormous sense of fulfillment (and va "vain" is an adjective, so you'd need "vanity" which is the noun equivalent. However, I think it reads more naturally here to just omit it. |
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