The summer is sometime is really hot, around all green, the best season ever. The summer is sometimes really hot, around all green, the best season ever.

The summer sometime is really hot, around all green, sometimes, but everything is green. It's the best season ever. The summer is really hot sometimes, but everything is green. It's the best season ever.

I would make this two sentences and try to clarify what you want to say.

The summer is sometime is really hot, around allbut everything is green, it's the best season ever. The summer is sometimes really hot, but everything is green, it's the best season ever.

The summer sometimes is really hot, around all green, the best season ever. The summer sometimes is really hot, around all green, the best season ever.

Add an "s" to sometimes. Not sure what you're trying to say by "all around green"

TheIn summer, it is sometime is really hot, around all green, but it is green around and it is the best season ever. In summer, it is sometime really hot but it is green around and it is the best season ever.

The summer sometimes is really hot, around all greengreen all around, the best season ever. The summer sometimes is really hot, green all around, the best season ever.

The autumn is a depressiong season. The autumn is a depressing season.

The autumn is a depressiong season. Or Autumn makes me depressed The autumn is a depressing season Or Autumn makes me depressed

Grammatically, if you want the sentence to stay the same, use the first correction. If you are talking about how yoj feel in the autumn specifically, then use the second correction.

The aAutumn is the season of depression season. Autumn is the season of depression.

The weather becomegets cold, the evenings are gettingget longer. The weather gets cold, the evenings get longer.

You could also say "the weather becomes cold", but "gets cold" sounds more natural

The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer. The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer.

The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer. The weather becomes cold, the evenings get longer.

The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer. The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer.

Add an "s" to becomes.

The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer., The weather becomes cold, the evenings get longer,

The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer. The weather becomes cold, the evenings get longer.

Matching the tense here.

bBut the trees change colors - occurs y. Yellows, reds and orange colors. But the trees change colors. Yellows, reds and oranges.

but the trees change colors - occurs yellow, red and orange colors. but the trees change colors - yellow, red and orange.

You don't need the word occurs and you don't need to repeat "colors" since you've written it already. There is context that allows the reader to understand you're talking about colors.

but the trees change colors - occurs. They become yellow, red and orange colors. but the trees change color. They become yellow, red and orange.

but the trees change colors - occursthere are yellow, red and orange colors. but the trees change colors - there are yellow, red and orange colors.

The spring is when things wake up time. The spring is when things wake up.

The trees become green, the weather is gettinggets warmer. The trees become green, the weather gets warmer.

The trees become green, the weather is gettinggets warmer. The trees become green, the weather gets warmer.

The trees become green, the weather istarts getting warmer. The trees become green, the weather starts getting warmer.

Tense again

The time when you are born again. The time when you are born again.

The time when you are born again. The time when you are born again.

(It is/It's) The time when you are born again. (It is/It's) The time when you are born again.

Not really a full sentence as you first put it, though if you're being poetic you could sometimes get away with leaving out "it is", it's not really standard

About my country's weather About my country's weather

About my country's weather About my country's weather

Include the 's here to indicate possession

About my country's weather. About my country's weather.

About the weather in my country weather About the weather in my country

About my country's weather About my country's weather

The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights. The winter is very cold, with a lot of snow and long nights.

The winter is very cold, very muchwith lots of snow and long nights. The winter is very cold, with lots of snow and long nights.

"very much snow" is understandable but doesn't sound quite right. A lot of snow or lots of snow would be better

The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights. The winter is very cold, with a lot of snow and long nights.

The winter is very cold, very muchthere is a lot of snow, and long nights. The winter is very cold, there is a lot of snow, and long nights.

"Very much snow" gets the point across and the meaning will be understood by English speakers. But, it's not grammatically correct and wouldn't be the natural way of speaking.

The winter is very cold, very much with a lot of snow and long nights. The winter is very cold with a lot of snow and long nights.

The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights. The winter is very cold, with a lot of snow and long nights.

"very much" isn't something that people use, since "much" is already a strengthener word and it sounds a little childish to stack them up like this. On top of that, when we're talking about volume, it's more natural to use "a lot of" here.