June 18, 2020
Portable Seawater Desalination Device
The first thing that gives rise to doubt is the principle of work. The manufacturer claims reverse osmosis. However, in this case we have deionized water at the outlet. Drinking such water leads to leaching of salts from the body and disruption of salt balance.
The weak point of the device also seems to be a mechanical lever. It is quite massive and applies a lot of stress to the mechanical parts of the pump. As a result, the device seems to be of low reliability.
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The first thing that gives rise toone doubts is the principle ofhow it works.
The first thing that one doubts is how it works.
This sentence is quite awkward. Suggestion of: how it works or principle it works on.
The manufacturer claims it works through reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works through reverse osmosis.
However, in this case we have deionized water at the outlet.
Drinking such water leads to leaching of salts from the body and disruption of salt balance.
The weak point of the device also seems to be a mechanical lever.
The weak point of the device seems to be a mechanical lever.
It is quite massive and applies a lot of stress to the mechanical parts of the pump.
As a result, the device seems to be of low may be unreliabilityle.
As a result, the device may be unreliable.
I think usually one would say that something has low reliability or that something is unreliable.
Another option (although less common) for the above is:
As a result, the device may have a low reliability.
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The first thing that gives rise to doubt is the principle it works on
The manufacturer claims it works by reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works by reverse osmosis.
However, in this case we have deionized water at the outlet.
Drinking such water leads to leaching of salts from the body and disruption of salt balance.
The weak point of the device also seems to be a mechanical levermechanical lever also seems to be a weak point of the device.
The mechanical lever also seems to be a weak point of the device.
As a result, the device seems to be of low potentially unreliabilityle.
As a result, the device seems to be potentially unreliable.
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As a result, the device seems to be of low reliability.
As a result, the device seems to be
As a result, the device I think usually one would say that something has low reliability or that something is unreliable. Another option (although less common) for the above is: As a result, the device may have a low reliability. |
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Portable Seawater Desalination Device |
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The first thing that gives rise to doubt is the principle of work.
The first thing that gives rise to doubt is the principle
The first thing that This sentence is quite awkward. Suggestion of: how it works or principle it works on. |
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The manufacturer claims reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works by reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works by reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works through reverse osmosis. The manufacturer claims it works through reverse osmosis. |
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However, in this case we have deionized water at the outlet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Drinking such water leads to leaching of salts from the body and disruption of salt balance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The weak point of the device also seems to be a mechanical lever.
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The weak point of the device |
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It is quite massive and applies a lot of stress to the mechanical parts of the pump. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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