Jan. 4, 2021
The Reasons to Work
People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Some people work because they enjoy their jobs. Aside from making a living, they find their goals and dreams in their jobs. However, most people are forced to choose jobs that are not ideal for them. These people work firstly to meet their basic needs. Some of them have decided to choose their work future based on the salaries of jobs. Since people are afraid of poverty they will not choose their desirable jobs which are not promising in terms of salaries. In their free time, they spend their time doing either recreational activities or what they always like to do. For example, someone who is afraid that he will not be successful in the music industry chooses medicine as his profession. However, he does not enjoy treating patients. His job might be the reason for his boredom. The only things that encourage him and give him some hope are what he does in his spare time.
For some people, jobs are sources of meaning. They find the meaning of their lives in their work. For these kinds of people merely having enjoyable, well-paid jobs are not satisfactory. They should see the meaning in their work to find them fulfilling. I was one of these people. When I was under pressure to choose a job that was not my ideal job I felt like I lost my way in the world. Before this, I could see a path that I should take but after that decision, the path was gone. I was only wandering around without knowing where I will reach.
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The Reasons to Work
People work because they need money to live.
What are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons.
Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Some people work because they enjoy their jobs.
Aside fromIn addition to making a living, they find their goals and dreams in their jobs.
In addition to making a living, they find their goals and dreams in their jobs.
What you wrote was right, but I find this more natural-sounding.
However, most people are forced to choose jobs that are not ideal for them.
These people work firstly to meet their basic needs.
Some of them have decided to choose their work futurecareer based on the salaries of different jobs.
Some of them have decided to choose their career based on the salaries of different jobs.
Since people are afraid of poverty, they willdo not choose their desirable jobs which are not promising in terms of salariesjobs they want if the salaries are too low.
Since people are afraid of poverty, they do not choose jobs they want if the salaries are too low.
In their free time, tThey spend their free time doing either recreational activities or what they always like to do.
They spend their free time doing either recreational activities or what they always like to do.
For example, someone who is afraid that he will not be successful in the music industry might chooses medicine as his profession.
For example, someone who is afraid that he will not be successful in the music industry might choose medicine as his profession.
However, he does not enjoy treating patients.
His job might be the reason for his boredom.
The only things that encourage him and give him some hope are what he does in his spare time.
For some people, jobs are sources of meaning.
They find the meaning of their lives in their work.
For these kinds of people, merely having enjoyable, well-paid jobs areis not satisfactory.
For these kinds of people, merely having enjoyable, well-paid jobs is not satisfactory.
They should see the meaning in their work to find ithem fulfilling.
They should see the meaning in their work to find it fulfilling.
I was one of these people.
When I was under pressure to choose a job that was not my idesuboptimal job, I felt like I lost my way in the world.
When I was under pressure to choose a suboptimal job, I felt like I lost my way in the world.
Before this, I could see a path that I should take, but after that decision, the path was gone. Before this, I could see a path that I should take, but after that decision, the path was gone.
I was onlyjust wandering around without knowing where I will reachould end up.
I was just wandering around without knowing where I would end up.
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People work because they need money to live. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What are some other reasons that people work? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Discuss one or more of these reasons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Use specific examples and details to support your answer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people work because they enjoy their jobs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Aside from making a living, they find their goals and dreams in their jobs.
What you wrote was right, but I find this more natural-sounding. |
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However, most people are forced to choose jobs that are not ideal for them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These people work firstly to meet their basic needs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of them have decided to choose their work future based on the salaries of jobs.
Some of them have decided to choose their |
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Since people are afraid of poverty they will not choose their desirable jobs which are not promising in terms of salaries.
Since people are afraid of poverty, they |
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In their free time, they spend their time doing either recreational activities or what they always like to do.
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For example, someone who is afraid that he will not be successful in the music industry chooses medicine as his profession.
For example, someone who is afraid that he will not be successful in the music industry might choose |
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However, he does not enjoy treating patients. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His job might be the reason for his boredom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The only things that encourage him and give him some hope are what he does in his spare time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For some people, jobs are sources of meaning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They find the meaning of their lives in their work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For these kinds of people merely having enjoyable, well-paid jobs are not satisfactory.
For these kinds of people, merely having enjoyable, well-paid jobs |
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They should see the meaning in their work to find them fulfilling.
They should see the meaning in their work to find it |
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I was one of these people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was under pressure to choose a job that was not my ideal job I felt like I lost my way in the world.
When I was under pressure to choose a |
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Before this, I could see a path that I should take but after that decision, the path was gone. Before this, I could see a path that I should take, but after that decision, the path was gone. Before this, I could see a path that I should take, but after that decision, the path was gone. |
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I was only wandering around without knowing where I will reach.
I was |
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