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New Year's Sunerise

When a new year comes around, people usually see the sunrise while praying new wishes.

I also go to a hill near my house to take pictures of the sunrise.

But I do this on the winter solstice.

After the winter solstice, daytime becomes longer than before.

So the day's sunrise is the real means of new year, I think.

Other reason is that, sunrise time is the latest of a year.

I don't need to hurry to go to the hill and see the mountain.

And the last reason is that there is easy to take a location to take pictures.

On new year's day, there are many people who want to see and to take pictures of the sunrise.

It is very hard to concentrate the sunrise only.

One week later, it is the day of winter solstice.

I look forward to see the new sunrise that day.

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I also go to a hill near my house to take pictures of the sunrise.

But I do this on the winter solstice.

After the winter solstice, daytime becomes longer than before.

I don't need to hurry to go to the hill and see the mountain.

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I also go to a hill near my house to take pictures of the sunrise.

But I do this on the winter solstice.

After the winter solstice, daytime becomes longer than before.

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 16, 2021

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New Year's Sunerise


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When a new year comes around, people usually see the sunrise while praying new wishes.


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I also go to a hill near my house to take pictures of the sunrise.


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But I do this on the winter solstice.


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After the winter solstice, daytime becomes longer than before.


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So the day's sunrise is the real means of new year, I think.


So the day's sunrise is the real meansing of a new year, I think. So the day's sunrise is the real meaning of a new year, I think.

I dont understand what you mean quite well..

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I didn't fully understand what you were trying to say, but I made a guess. :)

Other reason is that, sunrise time is the latest of a year.


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Same here - I didn't fully understand what you were trying to say, but I made a guess. :)

I don't need to hurry to go to the hill and see the mountain.


I don't need to hurry to go to the hill andto see the mountain. I don't need to hurry to go to the hill to see the mountain.

Again I dont understand what you mean. What I understand is up from a hill you see a mountain.

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And the last reason is that there is easy to take a location to take pictures.


And the last reason is that over there it is easy to take a(repetitive, you already used there, no need to emphasize location again) to take pictures. And the last reason is that over there it is easy (repetitive, you already used there, no need to emphasize location again) to take pictures.

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On new year's day, there are many people who want to see and to take pictures of the sunrise.


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It is very hard to concentrate the sunrise only.


It is very hard to concentrate on the sunrise only. It is very hard to concentrate on the sunrise only.

It is very hard to concentrate only on the sunrise only. It is very hard to concentrate only on the sunrise.

One week later, it is the day of winter solstice.


One week later, it is the day of the winter solstice. One week later, it is the day of the winter solstice.

I look forward to see the new sunrise that day.


I look forward to seeing the new sunrise that day. I look forward to seeing the new sunrise that day.

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